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[mAsA] Sex Education Book 'How to Make the Worst Horny Shitty Brat' (Fate Grand Order) (Aishii21)

性教育本『最低なヤリチンクソガキのつくり方』

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(Disowned)
Posted:2024-01-20 07:00
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:237.2 MiB
Length:34 pages
Favorited:227 times
Rating:
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Average: 2.52

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Posted on 20 January 2024, 07:00
Uploader Comment
Translated by: Aishi21
Commissioned by: Me (Don't judge)

email: aishi21moe@gmail.com
discord: aishi21
Posted on 20 January 2024, 11:01 by:   gigasgmx    PM
Score +119
Aishi21 ripped you the fuck off. This translation sucks.
Examples
p3: "It too stink"
p4: "all of it gone" should be "all of it is gone", or better yet the whole sentence should be restructured.
p4: the second dialogue ("How can ... hahaha") needs some fucking punctuation (for example, "I knew it have" should be "I knew it! Having")
p15: "tell those hag who is the cause pain on your cock!!" is such a word-abortion that I can't even figure out what it's trying to say.
Last edited on 14 February 2024, 11:33.

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