I am currently working on translating this whole tank. I did a poor job when I tried translating most of the chapters a few years ago, so I think I'll take another crack at it. This was actually one of the chapters that I didn't translate before; DesuDesu's translation from 2018 had a number of issues and notably screwed up on the ending: https://e-hentai.org/g/1210631/2bd85956e6/

Also, the bonus leaflet in the Melonbooks edition of the tank had 8 page bonus/omake to this story; I included a sample at the end of this gallery as that's all I could find of it. Apparently, it was a limited edition, but if anyone has it or can buy it, then please post it. It came out all the way back in 2018, so it would be a shame if we never saw it. Actually, the only reason I'm even posting this gallery is to increase the chances of the omake being posted lol

I promise to stop translating altogether if someone posts the omake lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 03:55.

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Nice job. Honestly not the artists best work I liked his aunt series better.

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Thanks man lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 06:00.

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I dont mind your TL, i hope doesn't get taken down.

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Glad to satisfy the fans lmao

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 03:54.

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owh for fucking sake just keep your shitty MTL to your self

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Oh look, it's a new Laruffi

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Post the omake and maybe I'll stop lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 03:55.

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I have the omake but I dont negotiate with terrorists.

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You don't have the omake lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 06:00.

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I thought we were finally rid of that laruffi dickhead...

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Reminder that greenie is an MTLer, yada yada, etc etc. https://files.catbox.moe/nxe99v.png

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What other bifidus bangers you want translated lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 04:06.

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How hard is it just to do a bit of editing to the text bubbles? Most people wouldn't even notice its a MTL if you did that.

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Don't feel like it lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 04:02.

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1210631/2bd85956e6/

if anyone wants to read the properly translated english version of this chapter.

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^You mean if anyone wants a shitty MTL that even fucks up the ending lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 06:00.

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@greengrasstree You really gonna come out and start insulting other TLs again after the mods just spanked you twice for bad behavior? Naughty naughty.

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The other translation sucked shit lmao

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Dude I guess you're not a native speaker. Your words are kinda...unusual.

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I keep my translations direct so it's as faithful to the Japanese as possible lol

If someone like cutegyaru translated it he'd make the mother talk like a schoolgirl for no reason "like omg Haruto Haru Harry your dick is like sooo gigantic lol SUS!" 😂

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 10:20.

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By the way, why is your favorite genre mommy incest? Some Freudian explanations behind that?

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I just like older woman x younger male in general lol

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I see.
By the way, you replied in 5 minutes.
What's the dedicated browser you use to refresh all your galleries? Must be a lot of tabs. Must be a good browser lol

Edit: sorry, I forgot to end my post with a "lol"

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Mommy son incest is the BEST lol

Last edited on 29 January 2024, 10:18.

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