No proofreading?

Base +6, hhe54 +6, errata +14

002
OG: 何しとるんやいいちんぽなくなんで
TL: "Please keep doing the nice thing that you're doing with your dick to me!"
ED: made up TL, directed at wrong person

003
OG: スゴっ♥しゅごいでこのちんぽ♥みゆき おっ♥くるくるっ♥
TL: "This dick feels amazing, Miyuki! You need it in your pussy too!"
ED: made up second half

OG: イクッ
TL: "You are cumming inside of me!"
ED: wrong subject/object

004
OG: イクイクイク
TL: "Ahh! I'm being filled with your cum!"
ED: made up TL

OG: イキたい♥ちんぽイキたい
TL: "Nao is bout[sic] to cum!"
ED: made up TL, she's not announcing an orgasm

005
OG: ここではチンポハメたいだけハメて
TL: "You can fuck with my pussy as much as you want with your dick."
ED: wrong speaker, made up TL

OG: 好きなだけイキまくっていいんですよ♥
TL: "You can cum on any or inside any part of my body as much as you want"
ED: this isn't about location

OG: 気持ちいい事しかないここでスケベを楽しみましょう
TL: "Let's enjoy the pleasure from all these dirty things as there is nothing wrong with that and this is normal for us to do!"
ED: made up TL

006
OG: 大事なこと忘れている気がするけどもういいや♥みんな一緒で気持ちいいし
TL: "I feel like I'm forgetting something important, but I don't care anymore as all that matters is that I feel good!"
ED: made up second half

007
OG: おっ♥あぁ…♡
TL: "Haa! Nao feels good!"
ED: made up TL

the rewrites get worse from here on out etc

Base +38, hm4ster +7