CN (Original): https://e-hentai.org/g/1473244/8ffeebcf1e/

Was Astaroth farming really half a decade ago...

That's one thick boat

*Celeste (Big Tiddy Goth) is a Boat Girl, yes this is not a joke

Base +6, Gigantz +6, shiranai +7, EvilB +6, grianj +6, Nobody_Know +9, Guardsman40k +7

what a twist - M. Night Shyamalan

Wow, 5 year have passed huh....

Base +6, Gigantz +6, EvilB +6, TABRIS_AO +9, Guardsman40k +7

弔，是鬼子幻想，润了

Base +6, qwwyer -6, babyidolmaster -6, yyyshou -6, Youshigou -6, firebomber -8, 肉肉蚌 -4, C_cai -4, mlt123 -5, tamamoharuna -6, 今宵_ -9, Luooo -6, eva9999 -8, and 3 more...

You might have wanted someone to proofread your thee'in and thou'in and such, cuz there are a lot of them in the wrong forms. Also, -eth goes on verbs and not anything else, so "backeth" is nonsense. You would write "Thinketh back", for instance. Not sure about why you would do all the apostrophe-ommitted vowels, or the random "T" in the middle of some of her sentences.

Base +6, Franka +13, bvat +3, EvilB +6, Bulopu +18, Taranan +11, a214908a +6, i sure do love dicks +6, hereforpandaonly +6, archmancer8 +6, Nightusre +7, Guardsman40k +7

@DarkToDark2 Thanks for the input. The tl;dr would just be I plugged my original script of modern english in a translator as I wasn't able to get someone familiar with old english for the linguistic side QC. Clearly this seemed like a not great but ok idea back then but not exactly.
I'd be more than happy to fix it up as a whole if you or someone else would like to help do a quick run-through. I can provide the original english script via DM if needed.

Base +11, EvilB +6, hereforpandaonly +6