Pretty good art work, but it's hard to have good dialouge with only one character. Is this supposed to be only some of the comic? I like muscle girls but, if this is all of the comic, it's kinda a let down. A set of individual images may be better.
It's the first comic I've ever done... I didn't want to be too ambitious... I am pretty novice at making comics...I know it's short... I hope that if you're into female muscle growth or just female muscle in general, you get some enjoyment out of it.I plan to do more soon...Hopefully you'll see improvement in the quality and artwork in the future.
Posted on 12 September 2010, 11:37 by: Necronomicron
Score +2
Please, PLEASE study a whole lot more anatomy. Proportions and whatnot are so wonky so often it's comical. Study hands, too- they're nearly grotesque in some panels.