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Ya know i never thought id be happy to see sonic as a girl but she's actually hot. wait hold up. is this female sonic from an alternate time line? because in another comic i read eggman was still alive and sonic accidentally stepped on a fake ring box that turned him into a girl.😕

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to say that this is Decent would be an understatement. this is fucking fantastic!

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@kieyzo

Seems to me every new story is an alternate timeline or universe, each one Sonic changing his gender.

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feel like he just wanted to get a fresh start with the whole thing

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Even if the reasoning for sonic becoming a woman is still flimsy I've got to say this is a step up. Hopefully it doesn't devolve into the basically master/slave shit with tails again.

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Nice to finally know how Sonic got that way.

Did you ever finish the original story?

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@Muffdiver thanks for the explanation i guess the artist didnt like how sonic was a slut for tails...but is still gonna end up being a slut anyway lol. also @hentairo the artist made a second chapter .just type in English sonic or the artists name and go from there. personally i feel bad that miss phase killed off her robotnic or eggman but i kinda get it,this sonic and tails have grown to teens or adults and eggman is old and feeble. my only question is where is metal sonic and will he play a role in getting any sort of revenge?

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@kieyzo

I would imagine that Robotnic would've been dabbling in transhumanism before then. With his intellect, he would've definitely been able to transfer his mind into a machine or something.

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I like the art. But, these stories have been getting kinda weird.

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@kieyzo actually you can right click on the artist name, then click open link in new tab, and it will pull up all their comics.

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Was expecting cringe but got hot and decent story

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oh god this is AMAAZING!!!

IM SO FRIKKIN HYPED FOR THIS TO DEVELOP!!

thank you, MISS PHASE!!!

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All it took to achieve world domination was not an army of machines, but an nice rack.

Eggman was really missing out on something.

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Its good to see this is still going.sonic looks like a Stone cold fox(no pun intended)

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Comic like that made me realize I was bisexual at 15 (now 25)

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hope you update this soon, two more pages have been posted on the patreon

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So Tails cares about sonic fucking the waiter because of... plot reasons?
The development here just feels a little more rushed than usual XD

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Why is there this weird hatred towards Tails like he's just a mere annoyance now? Dudes were "brothers" as Tails said for years but now all of the sudden that Sonic is a girl he's like nah fuck that i'm just some bimbo slut now? And the pro Trans theme feels really forced and on the nose and obnoxious. Phase can draw really well but they really need to work on their writing.

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CEO: "Liberals would hate if I kept you as a sex slave" Only because bastards like you wouldn't share.

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Im liking where this is going,sonic still has alot of brains in her head to think that plan up. And what's up with her golden(im guessing) form. Cant wait for more.

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The way this is going I wouldn't be surprised if Tails becomes the new Eggman.

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So... now after Tails tries to fix Sonic he just straight up ignores him and that's it... And several weeks later he meets up with Knuckles to discuss declaring war on the whole world over the ownership of the emeralds.

Okay genuinely what the fuck is this writing. Just because the characters in the story call out how ridiculous it is does not make it better. Making a story more needlessly complex does not make it better either.

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When someone who predominantly writes and draws porn tries to punch above their weight class and suddenly tries to become an "author" right in the middle of a porn comic. Jesus, it's Chemistry Class all over again.
People are here for the porn, not some ridiculous "deep" plot that wouldn't even fare well if it didn't have smut to string people along.

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"Rouge..."

Best line right there

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gonna say the same thing i always end up thinking on this artists work. this is so far removed from actually being sonic why not just take the last little step and make the OC. Like, wheres the appeal of using a familiar character that you love but then changing so much about them there is basically no resemblance.

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@blackheart327
Because no one gives a shit about some random Sonic OC #5,368,231 and why should they?
Not to mention you lose out on the gender-bend aspect of it.

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Holy shit! Tails became new Eggman?!

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@cg2324 this isnt a gender bend tho. A gender bend maintains the character while changing their gender. This character shares nothing with what they are supposedly being bent from other than a name a a few very basic design elements. wrong personality, wrong skills, au setting. I like me some female sonic, but this isnt that. This is slapping a few proper nouns onto an unrelated work for name recognition.

As for nobody caring about an oc, if the story isnt engaging enough to make them care, its not really a story worth telling

edit: fixed typos

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@blackheart327 Sorry it disappoints you. The character behavior being different than male Sonic is intentional - my stories have always been about Sonic genderswapping and having their entire personality be consumed by the change - while also measuring how the other characters would react. That's what I always explore and that's what I've been doing from the start. I don't think I'm adding random personality elements to Sonic; the stark contrast to her old personality is what makes it interesting to me and I always try to put some logic behind it. I'm sorry my Sonic isn't waving a finger and always talking about saving the world or being too fast.

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that goes back to my original question, what is the point of having it be sonic at all

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i just told you dude. it's the inversion aspect of it. i'm trying to depict how much ANY person would change in behavior if they were to change genders one day, or how much the birth-assigned gender confines a person and how the changing of genders grants them freedom when it comes to exploring themselves in a different way.

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Have you never read fanfiction Black? How are you browsing e-hentai without being aware of how this works? The point of fanfiction isn't to just make more of the original source material. It's to add something NEW to the formula. Sometimes this works out good, sometimes not, but "Let's take well-known characters and setting and add This One Wacky Thing" is kind of the core of fanfiction.

The One Wacky Thing here is that Sonic is female (and a huge slut) and now has different motivations because of this. "The point" of using the Sonic setting is that this is fanfiction, and that's how fanfiction works. You use an existing setting, characters etc as a framework to do your own thing, because not everyone is J.R.R Tolkien the first time they set out to make something. Fanfiction is not just endlessly, slavishly re-creating existing content. It's a vehicle, a jumping-off point to create NEW content and explore new ideas, because making literally everything from scratch right away is a pretty tall order.

This seems to be an evergreen problem with porn comics though. Anything using established characters is eventually plagued by people complaining the characters are "out of character," would "never act that way" etc. Yes, we know. It's a porn comic. SOME connection to the source material is preserved, because that's hot, but if the characters were 100% accurate to canon porn couldn't happen in most cases (certainly not in fucking Sonic the Hedgehog). This Sonic is clearly, obviously not canon Sonic. She's a weird, alternate-dimension-style what-if scenario. Some parts are carried over, many are not, that's how fanfiction works. There is no obligation for the character to be a 1:1 match to the source material, and god what a boring world it would be if all fanfiction held to that rule.

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@CuisineSonic you're overestimating gender's impact on one's self identity. Gender isn't self constraining in the slightest. If anything is being constrained it's due to the person's own personal psyche. Also if a person was raised in the exact same circumstances but simply genderswapped, no major changes on a scale you refer to would occur. To say that there would be changes would be to imply that there is a superior gender. Which is blatantly untrue.

I believe that's why so many people have issues with the writing present here. Seeing as how you're saying Sonic as a male is bored and unfulfilled as a hero. But as a woman she has found her true calling in life as a slut and a cum dumpster. You're trying real hard to put the work in and make your story believable, and I can respect that. But the direction you're taking this in is not very convincing for the point you're trying to get across.

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Love that Tails was about to call Sonic 'you blasted hedgehog.'

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@Chimera Theo I can see how this story keeps disappointing you but i also couldn't end up ignoring that you've been misattributing things about the plot, like "Tails has been ignoring Sonic" after she left. He simply couldn't, or didn't, want to track her out and instead built his robot, knowing full well Sonic would end up coming back to get the last emerald.

As a trans person living in a very unfriendly place (Turkey) who wasn't able to understand or come out herself in a timely, proper fashion - i do find the concept of gender to be extremely self constraining, especially when people have been putting expectations on your identity at an early age. Sure, it's my personal takeaway from my own experience, but that's what fuels my writing, and that's how I personally lived my life. Whether how important gender can be to shape one's mannerisms is probably a subjective topic; in any case it's a lot less factual than how you put it "in the slightest'. Yes, things are constrained due to the person's own psyche - and nothing in this story ever indicated the opposite. Ultimately, when someone's born with great potential, great power and great expectations, that might hinder their understanding of themselves. Now, if a magic change occurred to that person to bring them closer to who they really are inside, that WOULD realize that "snap" change, much to the disappointment/chagrin/shock of the others who put a lot of faith in this person's projected previous identity. I did not imply any superiority, if I did I don't think I'd make Sonic assume such submissive roles in sexual scenarios all the time.

Alternate universe explanation can be comfortable, but can also equally be dismissive, which is what I feel it to be. Take it or leave it, I try to interpret the Sonic you know and love as well, and try to draw a straight line of logic between him and Sonikko. Sonic in the original canon is very one-note. He's heroic, he's smug, he's deflective and in the end he's the hero. My interpretation of this is that Sonic is deflecting something and they're doing that because a lot of heroism is expected out of them. When they somehow break through, they immediately undergo a massive change, which they find to be freeing (as freedom is something Sonic has always yearned for).

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@CuisineSonic I probably should've worded it better, but I meant Sonic was ignoring Tails. So that's my B. As for everything else, I can totally see where you're coming from. From your viewpoint this story flow might come as completely natural, as well as a ton of other people. But there are also a lot of people who find this flow odd and strange as they aren't familiar with it as you might be. This could result in a lot of potential tonal whiplash. If you wanted to come across as less polarizing, I would suggest slowly building this ideal up, letting it settle from the background and slowly but surely make its way to the forefront of the story. Then when that ideal has settled for a good while you can really up the ante and go crazy in any potential direction you wanted. That way readers would be more open to new ideas and more invested in where the story and its characters were headed.

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@CuisineSonic Ok, wow. Sonic is a completely cold, dismissive bitch towards Tails and I don't know why. Why is this comic so relentlessly mean to Tails? Does the close sibling bond that they had just mean nothing to her?

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Wow. Honestly, the last panel on page 52 really just says it all.

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Authror's in the comments. Things just got spicy.

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ah, yes, Knuckles "it's okay to abuse the power of the emeralds if you're the chosen one, I guess" the Echidna. holy shit, the Sol Emeralds would be fucking SCREAMING.
also, how does Knuckles even know all of this incredibly detailed lore about his people? the original perfect chaos event was thousands of years ago and most of the history about the Knuckles Clan prior to that was totally lost, all that's really left are well-worn murals and carvings, and most of that is nearly impossible to decipher. and judging by his sudden random racism toward humans I'm going to go out on a limb and say that he's definitely not been letting any archeologists onto Angel Island to do any research on whatever _is_ left. so I guess Knux just managed to decipher all of this himself? on his own? KNUCKLES?

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@DarryusChaobal Knuckles still had parents, yknow... The lore just was never really relevant to him to talk about until today. It's not like he's ever seen a Chaos Mother before, he was just by told by his late parents about his lineage.

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@CuisineSonic Ok, and what in the world is up with the comic's needless mean-spiritedness and over the top, black-hearted cruelty towards Tails?

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@CuisineSonic first of all, no, not necessarily; he is an echidna, after all. both of his parents could have been long gone before he was even out of his egg. it's totally possible that he was raised by the will of the Master Emerald alone, possibly with the aide of small animals; both of which we know are sentient even if they lack the ability to communicate verbally.

either way, Knuckles not knowing much about who he is is kind of a core part of his character. I don't know what canon this comic is meant to be following (I think stuff related to Knuckles/echindas is way diffrent in the Archie continuity/continuities), but in Sonic Adventure it's pretty clearly stated that he dosn't know why he's the guardian of the Master Emerald or much of the history of his people. Knuckles not understanding what old murals were meant to be saying was even a pretty important plot point back in 3K, the mural in Hidden Palace shows what, if you didn't know the correct context, could easily be mistaken as Eggman protecting the Master Emerald from the threat of Super Sonic, especially after some coaxing from the good doctor; which explains why Knuckles attacked Sonic at the beginning of the game. (there's also probably something about it in Chronicles, but that game sucks and isn't canon anyway so, I'm not going to think about it.)

Although I will admit that I was a bit wrong about implying that it was ridiculous that Knuckles would be able to decipher ancient texts. in a scene that I failed to remember in Sonic Riders: Zero Gravity he's seen translating ancient texts. so if there was any legible lore left on Angel Island after the Original Perfect Chaos Event it wouldn't be out of the question that he could read it.

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@DarryusChaobal you're making plenty of assumptions yourself. I'm going by what's given in the games and kind of relying on the missing bits + vagueness of the backstory.

"Both of his parents could have been long gone before" they, also, could have been there - or at least one of them. Nothing really goes against it, so I'm going with it.
"Knuckles not knowing much about who he is is kind of a core part of his character" - His brief intro in Sonic Adventure 1 is very solemn. As far as I'm concerned that's the only spoken line where it's implied that he doesn't have all the answers when it comes to his duties of guardianship, but it can easily be interpreted as "I was told certain things but even then, I'm not ultimately sure why I am supposed to be doing this" instead of him not knowing anything other than his own compulsion to protect the Master Emerald. Likewise, the events of Sonic Adventure 1 and all those mental flashbacks about the downfall of the Echidna clan might have inspired him to "dig" deeper into his own heritage and expand his understanding on the matter (explaining his earned expertise in Zero Gravity). Again, nothing goes against my interpretation in the main lore, I think you're just kind of miffed that it doesn't align with yours. Yes, I know about the mural in S3&K- It's referenced in this comic itself. That mural is, essentially, a prophecy - instead of a documentation of past events, as such I don't believe it has a concrete written scripture to go alongside it (as the future's supposed to be vague) Imagery concerning Chaos in the Lost World however WAS a documentation of the past events, and I believe should be scattered and vastly incomplete since they should be put there AFTER the destruction of the echidna clan (which is why I made an explicit mention of how some echidnas did survive in the end, but dwindled in numbers due to continuing clan warfare).

And yeah, I'm choosing to completely disregard Chronicles.

@Slaan6 I have other comics that heightened Tails a lot so I just thought it would be interesting to assign him as a villain by happenstance. I like Tails a lot. Sorry if it comes off as I'm mean-spirited towards him, I just wanted to make his slip into madness more realistic and earned.

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@CuisineSonic Respectfully, To give credit where credit is due, it definitely felt realistic at the beginning with a good start. You did a great job of making the emotions feel real. However, it still ended up feeling forced as the comic went on. Specifically starting at the moment after Tails failed to revert Sonikko back to male. The moment Sonikko stepped out of the pod, she just instantly disregards Tails like he doesn't exist anymore. It comes out of nowhere. I get that maybe she was mad that Tails tried to change her back to male, but while Tails was wrong to do that, you could still understand why he tried to.

To summarize, Sonikko hurt Tails's feelings one morning, making him tear up, and run up the stairs. After that, Tails looked deeper into what happened in the lab, and was startled to find out that the sequence was actually aborted, yet Sonikko still changed into a woman. Which confused him and makes him think that something else was happening in the background. Which understandably sends him into a panic.

In the context of the story, Tails was just confused and afraid that something sinister was going on behind Sonic's transformation into a woman. Like maybe she was being brainwashed or mind-controlled, or corrupted somehow. He didn't understand, and was just afraid that he was losing his best friend to something sinister, and after so many years of sharing such a close sibling bond, Sonikko should have picked up on that, and at least *tried* to get Tails to understand. Tried to work things out.

Instead, she just instantly abandons him without even acknowledging that he exists anymore. It makes her feel heartless, cruel, and that's the main reason out of two reasons why this comic felt so mean-spirited towards Tails. The main reason is Sonkko's forced and absolute abandonment of Tails, and the second is that you kept Tails too sympathetic in the story for a fall into villainy to work, or for Sonikko's dismissiveness to feel understandable.

Sonikko's cold indifference toward Tails didn't feel earned. It didn't feel like he deserved that. It felt forced, contrived. Instead of addressing the problem with Tails, Sonikko just left that problem to fester while she traveled around the world to collect chaos emeralds. So that she can, from what I can tell, abuse their power. It kills any connection that I'm supposed to have with her, and I know that the reader is supposed to be on her side, because you included the usual themes that are meant to make Sonikko sympathetic. She's happier now, yeah, but I don't feel happy *for* her. All I see is a heartless bitch that hurt her dearest friend and reduced him to a ruined shell of his former self, and she has no remorse whatsoever. Despite so many years of being siblings together, she doesn't even hint at the slightest speck of lament for what they once had. By the end, it felt like if Tails were to straight up kill himself, she still wouldn't care.

As for making Tails the villain, That's definitely interesting if pulled off right. Unfortunately, it felt like he was going crazy, yes, but it didn't feel like he was turning *evil*. Even at the end when he's supposedly gone full villain, he still hesitated to attack her because clearly their past friendship still meant something to him. Sonikko on the other hand, during that same moment, had no reaction and still just regarded him with the same cold, cruel, and uncaring indifference.

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@Slaan6 First off I'm really thankful this comic of mine resonated emotionally with you and some others. As for the criticism, I completely agree, actually. I'll totally apologize for my misuse of the word "villain". What I meant was "main antagonist". Because yeah, I did try my best to convey these things you've got from this story. And no, I don't really consider Tails "evil".

Sonic is - for totally giving into the rush of her new body's attractive abilities, and also, chasing a destiny ready to embrace her. Nobody says The Power of Chaos has always been there for good, nobody says all that luck and pre-made prophecy is good for anyone else but Sonic herself. Sonic DID become cynical, greedy, self-heightened and self-important, yknow, like a business person would be at the top. In the end this is a setup for a porn series to follow, where it'll show a lot of scenarios where Sonic is severely undermined despite her position. She's happy, yes, but that doesn't immediately make her good-coded (or transitioning between genders). That DOES make Tails somewhat of a good-aligned character, however mad he might've ended up being.

I might've failed at juxtaposing Sonic's "own" breaking point (as opposed to Tails's), but it was the very moment she stepped out of the pod. All these years of being siblings is of course meaningful - but I also need to remind how disillusioned Sonic had become about his own heroisms, even after Eggman met his demise. Tails tried to take something from Sonic that made him/her a new meaning and trajectory in life, and Sonic was so obsessed with it that it was ultimately an easy decision for her to leave Tails. Not to mention - Sonic never attempted to directly hurt Tails (she only got Knuckles as a personal bodyguard who has his own reactions to all that's going on), and probably even would've accepted him if he just were to say sorry.

Ultimately I'm glad I depicted Tails's frustration in a way that it's justified he went crazy. But this is a story about Sonic getting corrupted by nothing but the promise of worldly significance, and unbreakable mystical powers that define her life. And I think that's where a lot of people cry foul, it is very OOC for Sonic. At that point I'll have to say; I wouldn't do what I do if I didn't get joy out of making Sonic so OOC that it's justified that she gets dicked very timelessly and disrespectfully all the time.

Some will ask, "but if Tails's good and if he tried to switch Sonic back to being a male, what does that say about all the underlying trans parallels? Do you mean transgenderism is bad?" No, as a trans person I wouldn't say that - but I personally believe that certain heightened desires, emotions and obsessions have all the power to invert the morality of a person, however saintly they might've been. That doesn't, or shouldn't, make that desire bad by its own. It's the decisions that we make in the pursuit of these desires, is what defines our alignment in the good-bad binary.

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@CuisineSonic I'm all for Sonic acting out of character. I agree that it's much more interesting that way. Sonic acting ooc isn't the problem. It's the *way* she acts ooc. Acting ooc is fine if she's still at least somewhat likable. In a story, it's important to be able to root for the protagonist. The real problem in this comic is that she completely ruined her likability.

You say that you might've failed at juxtaposing Sonic's own breaking point. If I may be honest about my opinion, there's no "might" about it. A stronger job could have been done to show her breaking point. Hence why her relentless coldness towards Tails feels instant and out of nowhere. You say that she probably would have accepted him if he had apologized, but they were both at fault for the downward spiral of their bond, and I would argue that Sonic started it. I'm not glossing over the fact that Tails made the bigger offense. I'm just saying that he's not the only one that owed an apology.

Readers expect to sympathize with the protagonist, and when the protagonist is a bad person that they don't want to see win in the end, it normally makes it hard for them to like or enjoy the story. Even when the porn is hot. It also tends to leave them with a very bitter feeling afterwards.

I absolutely love your works, and I'm really looking forward to what you make next. I definitely love all of the other versions of fem-Sonic from your other stories. I just can't enjoy this one in particular. Out of all of the different fem-Sonics from each of your different stories, this CEO version is easily the most unlikable. She is, simply put, a spectacularly horrible person

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This would have been all fixed if it just stayed more porn than plot...

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Half the comments are going on about how this should be straight porn but i like the story telling"sonic is the will of chaos personified as a male hedgehog he was like shadow but happier . sonic has always been tied to the chaos emeralds since they were introduced in sonic 2. Knuckles explained what was going on in the issue. Sonic is now the mother of chaos control. Shes a mini goddess right now and she barely knows it. Keep up the great work👍

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I hate this version of Fem-Sonic more with each new page. Just an unlikeable, reprehensible snake with no redeeming qualities whatsoever. To the point that I don't even care how sexy she is. She just feels ugly. No matter how she looks like on the outside

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This keeps getting more and more painful to read

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Broo rouge and shadow look awesome. Rouge has long hair and shadow has ba business suit? Ok show me more. Keep up the great work👍

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I legit don't get everyone's issue with Sonic's character arc as presented.
Especially since it was established early on that Sonic's passions were the rush of speed and the attention he'd get from the masses.
Sonic diving head first into a new, formerly unknown, rush makes sense. Especially since that rush comes with attention.
Another thing constantly established about Sonic is his dislike or dismissal of those that would take that rush from him. Except instead of Amy it is Tails now.
Tails freaked out of Sonic having sex. Before Sonic's dismissal, before Sonic indulging, before the emerald plot Tails couldn't handle Sonic being as blasé about sex as she is about speed.
Plus besides ignoring his call, Sonic didn't really do anything that's abnormal in their previous relationship. In fact he even turns down Dave's offer to cut Tails out of the business.

Also remember that Tails put the trackers in Sonic's breakfast, before she even mentioned sex, before the 'what are you my brother?' comment.
The only justification he possibly has for his actions is that Sonic got drunk and passed out in his bed.

But even taking that into account imagine that same situation but with Amy complaining about Sonic being reckless in beating Robotnik, him saying "What are you, my mom?" is perfectly in character when someone is talking about him being careless when he's having fun. The fun is just sex now, and Tails has a big problem with that.
Sonic isn't blameless, she should've answered Tails' calls but Tails fucked up earlier and harder.
Hell, even her dismissal of Tails after the machine exploded makes sense.
The whole chaos mother thing threw a wrench into the gears, I'll admit. But I'm not surprised at GUN's involvement or even that Tails is either behind it all or is reviving Eggman's tech.

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how is this still going on????

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I'm gonna go out on a limb and guess that this new scientist character ends up being the expert that Sonic needs to succeed at creating a perfected chaos battery without Tails's help. Absolving Sonic of any of the rightfully deserved karma that should have naturally come from cruelly screwing Tails over. Because apparently, the moral of this comic series is that if you're a horrible and reprehensible person, absolutely everything will always go your way.

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Hmm, I think for now is fairly ok with the things that happens in the series, I don't think we need to like this character, Our here is also the villain, and thus, over in the excess of sex, attention and pleasure is doing things to the image that tails had, and tails is going against the greed and other parts that this sonic is doing.
Let's say this story the new Sonic and the new Tails so to speak are just a breach they formed on how they viewed Sonic, For sonic is always about the fun and heroism, saving the world and doing the better while having the most of it, Doing it in "style", her new style is Sex and using it to move the masses, Tails viewed Sonic as an heroic Figure, so seeing going from the ideal Hero, to a slut, Clearly took tool of him, to the point he is hurting.

The major complaint is the Chaos part, but it also allows the story to have a conflict that is common in sonic imo, Sonic with the Chaos emeralds to do it's bidding it's taking more of a Robotnik way of handling things, GUN against the use of it, just using more diplomatic methods since Sonic is not attacking the world (yet), and Tails has taken the typical standpoint they always has been, just now without Sonic.

Tails has becomed part of a new rebellion against the usage of the chaos emeralds the way sonic wanted out of personal desillusion and out of sheer not agreeing with the ways it's using.

We can take Sonic as the Villain or Tails as the Villain, we just follow the PoV of Sonic tru all this, but doesn't mean is Our Hero, just means is our narrator of sorts, You can decide who is the side that is right after all, Sonic is doing a full control arc, that needs consecuences in the future, doesn't mean that it needs immediate pay off, sometimes, the best pay-off is when is slowly cooked.

They are introducing that Chos has favorites, what if you could control the favor of Chaos for your purposes? I think that's a good question this last few pages give us, and I think that could be a fun approach for furthering the story.

But eh, I am just here for the porn.

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Wow, this really went off the rails when Tails was freaking out when Sonic fucked that waiter. I mean, he's technically right. But it's not like that they were actually an thing.

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>This Rule 63 Sonic porn comic has lore

Didn't expect that.

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I realized that the circumstances that led Sonic to become a woman in the first place is a load of forced, contrived bullshit. We have 2 renowned heroes who have saved the entire world multiple times. One of whom is well known for being an unmatched scientific genius. They're proposing a project for an innovative form of powering the world with energy that is both clean and unlimited that Tails' genius mind is guaranteed to make work, and is guaranteed to revolutionize technology throughout the world, and apparently every single one of the potential investors are completely uninterested and dismissive of it? To the point that Sonic needed to have tits to catch their interest? Yeah, I call bullshit. Even if you were going with the excuse that the comic is set in a more cynical and realistic world, that excuse falls apart because the situation wouldn't go down like that in real life. By real life logic, all of the potential investors would be throwing themselves at Tails' clearly brilliant invention with dollar signs in their eyes.

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@Slaan6 do you live in a different universe than ours where we have access to cleaner energy solutions than oil, coal or thermo yet we can't take the step because big companies lobby against it and actually promote regression of societies with their wealth? what you deem unrealistic is just where we live.

the part about her having tits therefore getting a lot of interest is, yknow, that stems from the porn element.

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@CuisineSonic Yeah I'm well aware about big companies being against any new, clean energy because of profit and corporate greed ect. ect., but that can't be used as a counterargument when it's not presented within the comic itself as the reason why Sonic and Tails are being turned down left and right. We're not even meant to presume that as a supposed reason either. I know this because after Sonic became a woman and started sleeping her way to the top, everyone jumps on board with this new clean energy concept with no qualms over the fact that their precious profits from primitive fuels would be in danger of coming to an end. So their initial disinterest was effectively just for no reason. Aside from possible skepticism that Tails' invention would work. Skepticism that wouldn't make any sense. Or more likely, the reason why is simply just because the story needed to happen.

What, nothing to say? No other counterargument? Yeah, that's what I thought. I win, you lose.

Last edited on 21 December 2023, 22:14.

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#74: The day the job perk procced.

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So many new fetishes, so little pages.

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So the Chao made sonic start lactating? Ok go on...😆

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Really wish this had just stayed hot porn instead of trying to make a big grand plot, Tolkien this is not.

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Only a Sonic Porn comic would put more effort into the world-building than the actual porn

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Well, since Eggman can't create new Power-Up's, Sonic created her own.

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Least autistic sonic fanfiction

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"end" .....WHAT!?

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@hadorian do you know what issues are?

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