https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01144414.html
https://twitter.com/40010prototype

In hindsight, the TL'd title of this series should be a little different but it's too late for that now.

danke!⠀⠀⠀⠀

Base +3

I am pretty sure, there is still a copy existing under the care of Uiharu. Even she understands, it would be a crime against mankind to permanently delete it.

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>they're filming in interlaced

Absolutely disgusting.

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Uiharu sees Saten pron ..... goes Super Saiyan

Base +17, igurust +6, Techturd +6

11: i heard you the shutter
- one object too many? => i heard the shutter
17: of your's => of yours
24: the same acrylic panel before => the same acrylic panel from before
28: blank bubble in top panel
33: waiting to happening => waiting to happen
33: cleaning needed in bottom right panel
(〜￣▽￣)〜

Last edited on 22 February 2024, 20:28.

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In addition to what @orasmase posted, which I second completely

09: "That smile of your's is..." -> "that smile of yours is..."
Another note on that page is that "Good thing!" is super stiff and I've never seen it used like that. "That's good!" would work a lot better as an exclamation of relief in my opinion, or a cliched "thank goodness!", something like that.
Also, a reminder that page 09 is also included in the following double page.

13: "... was there anything from the first go around that..." -> "first go-around"

18: "You might think that because we want to get good shots of your face that we only need to point the camera there, but that really isn't the case" -> the second "that" isn't needed, the one before "we only need to point the camera there"

26: "They'll imagine you riding on someone" -> "riding on top of someone" seems way more appropriate

28: "go around" -> "go-around"

32: The entire second bubble, "Wait, let's finish things off with one more thing for the camera" doesn't sound right, and also repeats "thing". Considering the original, something like "Wait, let's finish things off with one more smile for the camera" would be better. I can see why you didn't translate it directly though.

Not going to bother with the afterword... Thank you for your work, it's very well done, especially on a technical level.

Last edited on 22 February 2024, 19:38.

Base +16, YakiYama +7

First of all, you're kinda insane for doing all the sfx, but I respect it.

Just wanted to chime in and point out that you missed some sfx on page 17 (bottom left) and page 28 (The black bubble).

Funnily enough, someone wanted to commission me for this, but I only would've got to it in the next few days. I had a strong feeling you'd be on this (I would've tried to double check), so I'm quite glad you uploaded this now to save me the trouble and that person's money.

Base +10, CatsAlsoMoo +6, cybeast93 +26, isno +6, Jalouin +6

Wardrobe malfunction was kinda hot for me, but these two works elevated it to straight up kink. Also, how come we don't have wardrobe malfunction as a tag yet?

Base +7, mbmj +6, GenLoveless +6, 2Ecchi4You +6, GGS +10, Jalouin +6

@kyuume You should've asked anyway so that I could have someone better do it! I was going to upload this whenever someone else got the digital up, but it never came so here we are. As an fyi for anyone in the future that wants to get in contact with me, I'm pretty much unreachable unless I just uploaded something, so don't wait too long for a response and just do whatever.

I was going to leave p17 untouched since the digitals didn't take care of that for me and sea urchins make me sad, but I guess I'll do it after all. Thanks for team public qc as always btw

Base +12, MuneMuneOppai +6

Man, 40010 1-go has great art. I wish they'd do some impreg stuff.

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@z2000

Nah, I feel like you've done this justice enough. At the end of the day, that's what I care about the most. I know I certainly wouldn't have gone through and done up all of the SFX.
Plus, this is a win for everyone involved, in my eyes at least. The person gets what they wanted for free, neither of our time and efforts is wasted, and additionally, I'm free to work on something else.

Now onto more additional QC that I'm noticing now:
I'm unsure if you use CSP, but this is a problem that I've encountered multiple times because of it. Compared to the raws, every single one of your pages are brighter.
The fix for this is adjustments > exposure > gamma correction: 0.80 (or whatever value does the job) and copy paste that adjustment layer to every affected page.

Page 32 / 33 is duped except for the change you made.

Base +10, Jalouin +6

again a shame the female staff member didn´t get involved

aside from that, as good as the first one

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This type of setting is so hot, wish there was a tag to easily find more stuff like this

Base +6

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 8. Translation 8. True to character 8. All out of 10.

Base +10, isno -6

@ jimmy118 P-san here was wise to not film himself in the video.
Angelic Uiharu can "rm -rf " anything she has the coordinates from remotely (she erased a fucking black hole far away from earth).

Base +7