Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2839880/a8b7b826fe/

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I know it's hentai but that's some really dogshit typesetting

Base +9, Megaton +45, Jdoe10 +5

I appreciate the translation, but please consider downloading the original images instead of the resized ones next time.

Base +6, Megaton +45

better version: https://e-hentai.org/g/2845446/3ebae1001d/

anyway some tips:
- translate the title
- use periods / full stops
- for simpler stuff like this, put your text on one layer before applying an even white border
- if you're not cleaning sfx fully, putting the english nearby and slightly smaller is less ugly than putting it on top
- if you are cleaning sfx/text that overlaps a bubble's borders, you need to redraw the borders
- move around hearts etc if the english is awkward to place
- please get a script editor, the actual english here is mostly functional but not good

Last edited on 02 March 2024, 09:47.

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