This doujin was published as part of the Translation Update of the week of the 24th.
Translator: Maou Zenigame
Editor: Vanitas

Doujins.com link:https://doujins.com/doujins-original-series/bonten-beauti-gal-life-2-76751

Yay, the orgy is in the past.

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GYATTDAMN

That is one MASSIVE, DARK CHOCOLATE MAMA.
Fantastic cover! Love seeing her massive, delicious tits and breedable body. fuuuck

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Good work, but something always seems extremely off about this glamorization of "letting loose". Like, there's a reason people in general don't like people being this flighty.
I can usually ignore it, but taking all that time to describe how she got from point A to point B really stuck in my craw.

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This translation is weird, like some kind of slop GenAI edited in with silly stuff. Boten is always great regardless.

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@jackjackjack2
Yeah, what made me squint was the part where メスイキ (mesuiki, usually dry-orgasm when referring to males experiencing a "female-orgasm") is translated into female-cumming when its about an actual girl, has no nuance, feels redundant, way too forced and literal to a fault.

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milk chocolate

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@jackjackjack2
I did say I'd translate this, so worry not.

(I'm also seething at getting sniped.)

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cutegyaru rescuing cute gyarus, great. I look forward to your work. :)

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