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The fucking jpeg backgrounds are killing me lol, I'm here reading and see two different sets of roads and a bunch of white background.

I get there's a lot of scen shifting and the like, but damn

Base +6, urmomdotcom +6

very predictable these stories are samey.

Base +7, Afganitia -6

They may be predictable but then again, they are under the label 'feminisation' so how do you expect the story to go? I really enjoyed reading this, well done. I would have liked to see a few extra pages with the fully sex changed Millie with Luciano though.. Any Chance?

Last edited on 12 March 2024, 16:57.

Base +6, urmomdotcom +6

I like reading and seeing how characters in these feminization stories accept their fate and some sooner than later don't want to come back. And they always look fabulous in the end. Cool, cool

Base +2, Afganitia +6

is this a KK fic, kinda feels like it.

honestly, this is a poor story that can be summed up as "sister helps feminine brother while she steals his identity to steal his business". I mean the fact the sis went FTM is wack as there was no indication she was that way, not only that it's an obvious plot contrivance to close down any chance of the brother reclaiming his identity

Base +6, Gorm +7, CancelledTuna -6