Fifth Day, fifth release.
My comment is in the credit page
Let me know below if, there are mistakes or constructive criticism.
Enjoy

Fixed missing "f" on 2nd page lower window start of last sentence

RAW Data: https://e-hentai.org/g/1803048/b866a48df5/

Cleaned Pages for Chapter 05 and translation script:

https://e-hentai.org/g/2857325/d4c017bf90/

If you use them please give credit
and or show me what you did with them

Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2854252/5b1c980b09/
Part 2: https://e-hentai.org/g/2855039/c9f45d12d2/
Part 3: https://e-hentai.org/g/2855569/5872562a4e/
Part 4: https://e-hentai.org/g/2856467/12d0421c74/

overall the chapters without original raws should probably be tagged as rewrites

from just the first page

OG: 你是我們新的目標。
TL: "You are our new Semen Dumb[sic]"
ED: she's just a target

OG: 從今往後聽從我們的指令。要是報警的話，我們就會把你的凝態散播到全世界去。要恨的話就恨那個叫敦子的女人吧
TL: "If you call the police or fail to obey our orders, we will spread the videos and pictures we took online. If you want, you can blame Atsuko for that."
ED: you're combining separate sentences, adding details that aren't present, and rewriting others. there's nothing about "blaming" for example

the next few pages diverge from the Chinese TL, too. telephone translations are already janky, but when you're not familiar with either language it gets even worse, unfortunately (and in this case you don't even have the original raws)

Base +38, Jouven +8

I stopped pointing out grammatical and spelling errors as I realized he was using Google translate, ChatGPT and chinese translations. (and the spelling mistakes didn't really stop, so why bother)

In the uploader comment of another gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/2855569/5872562a4e/

"Since i only have the chinese translation i used
https://translate.google.com/?sl=auto&tl=en&op=images
to make a basic translation and sort out script,
i did rewrite it several times with Chat GPT..."

Last edited on 15 March 2024, 00:28.

Base +42, tears_zero +13, Jouven +8, etamxes +6

i will stick to cleaning and redrawing the chapters hope someone picks it up for translation...
I thought i did somewhat ok.... but it seems AI might be passable at proofreading,
but not much more.
At least i get a bit of photoshop training.

Last edited on 15 March 2024, 01:04.

Base +6, tears_zero -13, lovebigbreastmilf +4, ng34 +6

update the torrent please

Last edited on 15 March 2024, 11:22.

Base +6, Tizatln -9

I fixed the one mistake that i saw,
if there is stuff that needs fixing,
in the upload comment is the
link to my textless pages,
anyone is free to use them.

As for translation i can't provide an
accurate one with my knowledge and tools,
the rewrite takes me 75% of the time,
and that time investment is not worth the result.
I also reclassed every release an " rewrite ".

I will upload cleaned version of 1 to 4 over the weekend.
Will try to get rid of the mosaic censorship,
but that's not as easy to remove as a black bar.

Base +6, hentaipower938 +1

someone please update the torrent please

Base +6

I'm honestly surprised none of these women committed suicide.

Base +7