thanks you so much for translated, been waiting for awhile

Base +4, Chunga -19, aasAaasd -9, Mignonette -8

Thanks a lot.

Base +5, Chunga -19, aasAaasd -9

It's difficult to read yellow text with a white outline when the background is skin toned (like on page 78/135). Please consider increasing the font size and/or changing the font color and outline color.

Base +6, Woody Pack +6, aasAaasd +9, Mignonette -8, trewerd +7

Google translate and extremely poor typesetting. Just what I like to see.
KCCCC stuff might be rather samey, but they still deserved so much better.

Base +6, Woody Pack +6, Maxer123 +6, aasAaasd +9, Mignonette +8, minhcccp +7, Bubblejum +6, Frankon +6

1280x torrent link pls

Base +6, Vladds01 +6, Mignonette -8, Lord Janus -19

Honestly, the translation is not even that bad. But the image quality and the font colors blending with the image make this very much unreadable.
I get wanting to preserve the original font style, but sometimes is better to take some creative liberties for the sake of clarity.

Base +8, Bubblejum +6, Frankon +6

First, the readability issues are unfortunate. My priority was consistency with the translation of Part 1, and I did not have any issues with the original files. Nevertheless, the compression on this site severely impacted the images. I would recommend downloading the originals for the best experience if possible, though obviously that is not ideal.

That being said, all of you who are criticizing my work must understand that I was doing this for my own purposes in my free time. This is my first time undertaking a project like this, but I am extremely happy with the outcome. The only reason I shared it was because I thought others might prefer a shoddy translation to nothing, since that is what I would prefer.

If you think shoddy work is worse than nothing, and that the original material "deserves better", then you can either commission a professional (which I must again reiterate, I am not), or learn the necessary skills yourself so you can do a better job. That being said, I will not let the reproach stop me from uploading something like this again if I decide to MTL another work for my own use, since it's clear that there are some people who appreciate it. Thank you to those who have expressed kinder sentiments and constructive feedback. Both will influence me in the future.

Also, a big thanks to the people who tagged the post when I forgot to.

Last edited on 22 March 2024, 13:46.

Base +2, Mejivoro +6, LikewiseLikewise -7, Uvigz -6, sanyachan +6, hchan1 -8, Mendenbarr +6, everyfin is taken +6, xydler +6

Fried rice again

Base +3

I'm confused, why did her skin and hair colour change back?

Base +6

The uploader seems to have gone with an alt set for the translation, the original gallery had the final scenes in both her transformed state and original state

Base +10, Shyenne +7

What an odd decision. Why go with the non transformed look?

Base +6

Gentlemen's please uploader explained it on the first page.

Base +6, Shyenne +7

Oh, couldn't find an uncensored version with the corrupted version. That's an understandable reason, but still makes it weird. But if the alternative is it suddenly starts being censored, damned if you do damned if you don't.

Base +6

So the reasoning for using the uncorrupted version of the gallery is because of the lack of uncensored version. Even though almost every other language this was translated to has both versions of the gallery uncensored. Ok.

@js5561379 I get that you made this more for yourself, but it's important to reiterate that the work can be heavily improved. I myself have a few translated works, but i keep them to myself. Uploading a poor translation reduces the chances of the work in question getting a proper translation, since most of the pros will spend their time on galleries untranslated, and commisioners will pay for what they don't have.

Even if you are "extremely happy" with the outcome, please consider making some improvements on gallery. Take some pride in your work.

In case you decide to complete the gallery or even upgrade the quality, here is the full uncensored textless gallery: https://e-hentai.org/g/2276252/0106de178c/

Base +8, xydler -6