OG: 1回勝負の文句無しせーの… TL: "The first round. One. Two..." ED: missing first half of line
OG: さいしょはグー! TL: "Ow. It's rock win I guess" ED: completely made up line
OG: よしゃぁぁぁぁ TL: N/A
OG: イっチバンげっとぉぉぉ TL: N/A
OG: 一応車道側だけバスタオル貼って見張りとカメラは残りが交代っつー事で TL: "Put the towel on both side car glass. Akito going to be the cameraman" ED: made up TL
OG: シートそこだけ立てといて TL: "Shut up and do your job!" ED: made up TL
OG: 俺実はガキの頃津子さんがサッカーの試合応援に来るの…超楽しみにしてたンすよ… TL: "When I was a kid, you used to cheer me in as occer [sic] match." ED: he's talking about himself, not just about what she used to do
004 OG: ここまで来てこんな事言うのもなんだけど… TL: "I know it's not right to say this. But..." ED: she's not saying it's not right
OG: だってコイツの初恋タケシの母ちゃんだから TL: "You said Takeshi mother is your first love" ED: wrong subject
OG: 安心して TL: "Yo." ED: made up TL
OG: 絶対に流出なんてさせないから... TL: "This is my frist[sic] time. So..." ED: made up TL
etc
Base +38, DoneAndGone +6, Aristoplato +11, Tizatln +9
7 years after the raw, 5 years after someone only translated the last two chapters and this is what those who waited for translation got. Tagging rewrite since the faggot even cut off the last page, which clearly an attempt to fit the story to his fetish. To think i have the same fetish as this fuckwit.
Base +13, lurkm0ar +6, DoneAndGone -6, richiel06 +6, Tizatln +9