006 OG: なんて TL: "How to say it..." ED: this isn't an expression about how to phrase something
OG: 昨晩は気取ってみたものの、あまりにも情けないウラがあったりする。 TL: "When I tried to put on airs last night, well there's a very pathetic reason for that." ED: he's not talking about having a reason for putting on airs
008 OG: 着替えさせられ、さらに口で抜いて貰って尚も手を出せなかった俺。最早、誇りなどなかわた。 TL: "Being made to change clothes, and getting a blowjob even, and to top it off, I couldn't lay my hands on her. I had already no pride left." ED: the conjunctions are all off which makes this TL nonsensical
OG: ――まあ君の所有している内から使う分には好きにしたらいいさ TL: "Well, you can use whichever you want among the ones you have." ED: it's not about which one but about how much
010 OG: ほら…最近エッチしてなかったじゃない? TL: "Remember...that you haven't been wanting to have sex?" ED: this isn't about his desire
OG: さわって見せて? TL: "Want me to touch it?" ED: he's not asking about what she wants
OG: なんか寂しいなぁ TL: "That sounds kinda lonely." ED: not lonely in this context
012 OG: なんで? TL: "How so?" ED: this doesn't make sense in response to her
013 OG: さすがに恥ずかしいわよこれ… TL: "There's no way this is not embarrassing..." ED: either ESL moment or you got the wrong speaker
OG: な、なんでずっとおなかさすって… TL: "W-why are you rubbing my tummy..." ED: missing middle part of the line
OG: いいよ、そのままくすぐったくなってって TL: "It's fine, it's a good thing that it's ticklish" ED: he's not saying it's a good thing (directly leads to her response)
016 OG: こんなにおっきくしてくれてたんだ… TL: "And he got this big for me..." ED: added conjunction that changes the meaning
017 OG: なんだか切ない…? TL: "But it kinda feels empty...?" ED: it's not about emptiness
OG: これで奥まで突かれたことは知ってるから… TL: "I do know what it's like to have this thrusted deep inside me..." ED: this isn't what she says but if it was it would directly contradict the line before
019 OG: 動悸でおかしくなりそう…だっ TL: "It's throbbing so much I might go crazy..." ED: she's talking about herself not his cock
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007 "we gave vibes" 007 "who had grew" 007 "Melt around the time we first started having sex, she wanted me to ..."" 007 "hauting" 007 "is having sex or not all the same to her" 008 "Being made to change clothes, and getting a blowjob even, and to top it off, I couldn't lay my hands on her." 008 "I had already no pride left" 010 "but since now...maybe we'll be able to make each other feel good..." 015 "Ah right, I can't leave this place without licking!" 019 "... the first time that I come to experience it for myself..."