Really good, needs a 2nd one.

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>removes pages
>Uses the word intersex
>Changes the story from the gal always being a futa to transforming into one
>All the girls are transforming into "intersex"
>Hormone talk
this is beyond just being a shitty rewrite, this is just pure bastardization of the source material especially the last two pages, where you added her growing a cock.

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At least change the titles when you make these rewrites. Whenever you start spreading them around they end up replacing the original versions on other sites!

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I don't understand why this rewrite was even made?

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I'm going to do a re-re-write of this and turn it into an isekai.
"Trapped By a Trap?! I Was Reborn Into a World of Futa Gyarus, and Now I'm a Walking Cocksleeve!"

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This is so bad I suspect it is a deliberate troll. Perhaps an early April fools joke?

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