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Chinese version at https://e-hentai.org/g/2426110/e0c0af24bf/

004
OG: こんなお兄ちゃんと妹です（本作では既に一線を越えてます）
TL: N/A
ED: this was not erased in the Chinese TL

005
OG: 今までも気にせず行けばよかったのに
TL: "You should just go, don't worry about us Mom"
ED: he's talking about the previous times. the Chinese TL got it wrong (去就好啦，而且現在也不用在意這些了)

OG: 僕のはもう半分趣味みたいになってるから
TL: "Besides, I see this as a source of enjoyement[sic] now"
ED: not sure where the besides came from. the Chinese TL threw it in (況且)

006
OG: めちゃくちゃ意識してる
TL: "I did that subconsciously"
ED: he says the exact opposite. the Chinese TL got it wrong (下意識就)

009
OG: …唯もいっぱいお兄ちゃんにくっつきたい…
TL: "...I also want to stay by Onii-chan's side forever...
ED: she doesn't say forever. the Chinese TL doesn't state it either (唯也想要一直呆在哥哥身邊)

010
OG: でもまずは連休課題やろうね
TL: "First of all we must properly plan ahead our holiday assignements[sic]"
ED: actually do, not plan. the Chinese TL got it wrong (首先要好好安排一下这次的假期課題)

OG: いっぱいあるだろ
TL: "There's definitely more to it when you say that..."
ED: this is the same speaker, and he's asking a question. you got thrown off by the Chinese TL (肯定不只這層意思)

OG: かたい つかれた…
TL: N/A

OG: こんなに気持ちが軽いのいつぶりだろう…
TL: N/A

012
OG: がっつかないように我慢してたんだけど
TL: "I've been holding back this whole time to avoid disappointing you"
ED: ??? he's not trying to avoid disappointing her. the Chinese TL got it wrong (為了不讓你失望我可是一直都在忍耐者)

013
OG: だってお兄ちゃんしかいないし…
TL: "It's not useful anyway with Onii-chan around..."
ED: she's not talking about its usefulness. the Chinese TL got it wrong (因為對哥哥又用不到)

014
OG: 唯、乳首敏感だもんな
TL: "I'll thoroughly take care of them today"
ED: completely rewritten line. he's describing her nipples. the Chinese TL is rewritten as well

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@rsx205
So basically the Chinese translation was awful and now we're suffering for it in English as well.

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i hope the mistakes are fixed...someday

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Akira better knock up Yui, they're a cute couple.

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