it looks like you're tling from a downscaled Chinese scan
and you drew the menu in yourself on page 3

004
OG: もう一つ伝える事があるの
TL: "let me tell you what happened"
ED: she's saying she has one more thing to tell him

005
OG: 揉めるのも嫌だったから判を押したわ．．．
TL: "I was just tired of arguing with him, so I signed the papers"
ED: she doesn't say she was tired of arguing the Chinese TL changed this line (我已經厭倦了和他爭吵所以就直接按了印)

007
OG: 村井さんどうしますか？
TL: "Murai-san, do you want to rethink this?"
ED: she's not asking him about rethinking anything

OG: これからも続けてくれますか？
TL: "Isn't it better to keep it the way it is?"
ED: she's not asking if it's better or worse

008
OG: 俺は弥生のこの言葉に戸惑った河合さんの辞職や離婚不可解な事が重なった為だ
TL: "Yayoi's words made me hesitate because of Mr[sic] Kawai's sudden resignation and divorce, I felt strange"
ED: he doesn't say that he felt strange or hesitated

013
OG: ヒグッ
TL: "Cumming!"
ED: made up line

014
OG: グッ
TL: "I'm going to..."
ED: made up line

OG: ウゥッ
TL: "Cum!"
ED: made up line

016
OG: 以前にも増してお互いの体を貪り合うようなセックスを重ねていったが
TL: "I wanted to have sex like before, where we hungered for each other's body"
ED: he's not talking about his own desire, just describing the situation

019
OG: そういう事だったのか
TL: "So this is how it is"
ED: tense mixup, he's coming to a realization

Base +38, Th3 Sl0th +6, r0r005 +7

oh man title that i follow ruin by Ai/MTL translation again

Base +6

It was NEVER his pussy... It was ONLY his turn!

Base +6, plexorz +10