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On the one hand, hyper tits that are drawn to have visual weight and mass: hell yes. On the other hand, this gallery has precisely 0 good vibes. This character feels like just distilled depression.

Base +6, Megazord0h +6, GETPREGNATEGET0 +2, somerandomdude33 +26, Ensei Sohryu +6

Assuming she's against OF, if she were to just swallow her pride for a short while she would be in a much better spot financially

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@archmancer8 I would too if I got a flesh masses that one hand attract every single pair of eye in the room to them so much so I became center of attraction and on the other hand These thing simply gave me a neck pain day in day out.

Base +6, Und3adgam3r -7

The inking/colouring on a lot of these isn't up to the same quality as the original sketches, is that being done by someone else?

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@Mike-O-Shay i colored it, i was kinda horny so i saw the sketches from a long time ago so i tried to finish the sketches myself, what do you think ? Do you like ?

Base +1, SarrenTheHunt -6

@Gugassauros2 - The linework isn't smooth enough, and with this aesthetic it needs antialiasing. Inking is supposed to be a "best pass" of the lines from the sketch, but here it's winding up jerky/jagged, and sometimes the lines aren't cut off cleanly between layers. On the balcony one where her top's bursting open, a bunch of lines from the bed are jabbing through her arm. Lines that should be perfectly straight, like the doorframe, glass, and chair, are wobbly and lumpy. Even the ones that are "straight" have the distracting aliased staircasing effect.

You're doing an alright job working on shading, and adding some extra touches to flesh out the pieces (sheen on glass/hair, extra touches with shadows/textures/patterns) but the biggest mark against it is the squiggly linework.

I think it would benefit from experimenting with brushes and width a bit more, and possibly a better separation between the character and the things around her. Maybe different linework for characters that aren't the main focus, or no dark lines at all on background elements. Use the straight line tool more, or use a program that will autocorrect lines into a vector.

Personally, if I'm browsing through a gallery like this, I'm drawn in by the character's original artist. I don't browse character galleries too often, so I don't know what the standard sort order is, but I'd prefer if all the official art was grouped together at the start, either old>new or new>old, with fan works and spinoff attempts all listed after it.

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