NOTE: THIS IS THE FIRST SEVERAL EPISODES. THERE ARE CURRENTLY 44 EPISODES ON THE PATREON. https://www.patreon.com/jackthemonkey

I've decided to release the first few of episodes of Hell Beckons (INCLUDING A SOME SNEAK PEEKS) for ya'll! But trust me, it gets A LOT hotter! (tugs at the collar). Wowzers! There are a lot more episodes on my other sites (SEE BELOW). There'll be a new released every month (sometimes twice a month).

Hell Beckons is an episodic ADULT tale of innocence corrupted. And oh how the corruption will spread! Dream big I always say!

SYNOPSIS: Caitlin Smith is a meek and timid housewife. Her husband no longer touches, her friends ignore her, her neighbors laugh at her, and her family thinks she's useless. But all that changes when her husband brings home and recites passages from a mysterious book. Gradually, innocent and kind Caitlin is corrupted into something dark and cruel, and those that wronged her will bow before her. And those that please her, will serve her in Hell. The world will never be the same. Well, that's it! It's going to be a blast! Pages are coming quickly! Come support this project AND MORE!

Find many more episodes on https://www.patreon.com/jackthemonkey or as another option check out https://gumroad.com/jackthemonkey

now the face are much better than before

Last edited on 08 May 2021, 18:30.

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Thnx for your input, but I completely disagree. I think there are one or 2 figures that could be redone, but for the most part, I love the poses and expressions and hope it will continue as such.Thanks again!

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I'm going to have to second the other poster.

The faces have a very plastic, uncanny valley look to them. They simultaneously have too much and too little detail, stretch too much AND don't stretch enough. A lot of the expressions look like someone's O face caught on camera.
They legit look like 80s stop motion monsters in a Clive Barker film. Even when they're ostensibly supposed to look human.
The bodies themselves mostly look fine, pretty good actually. But the facial expressions need a lot more subtlety if they're going to be that detailed, or LESS detail if they're going to be that unsubtle.
You're making the very, very common mistake of applying anime, comic book and traditional animation expressions to realistic 3-D models. If you want an idea of what you should try to go for if you want to use realistic models, I recommend studying the old comic book mini-series "Kingdom Come" painted by Alex Ross. It doesn't use 3D models (since those were REALLY expensive to make) but the painted art style is close to the angle you want to be doing with faces. Though Ross does overdo the "shadowed eyes" thing a bit. The ending conversation between Batman, Superman, and Wonder Woman in the restaurant especially is something worthy of study for a piece like this.

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@jackthemonkey
Like how the others have said already, it's the combination of realistic 3D faces and cartoon/anime facial expressions that's throwing people off. Besides that, there seems to be nothing wrong with the renders or story. Most of your experience is in 2D, but unfortunately, 3D has different rules to 2D. Muted/subtle expressions might look bad in 2D but works for 3D.

Don't sweat it. Everything else is solid besides the facial expressions. The rendering and panel layout looks good. I can actually read the text boxes and speech bubbles and follow the plot. The story itself is interesting, and the writing is free from errors. The same cannot be said for a lot of 3D comics.

Last edited on 25 July 2020, 20:00.

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Thanks for your work, I'm looking forward to where this leads to

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Looks promising, looking forward to more!

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Allow me to add fuel to the fire. 1st i don't the faces . its hard to draw 3d figures. so do what you do best and keep it up. also cant wait till she starts transforming. thumbs up from me bro 👍

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The faces are fine. It’s his artistic statement and we need more of that honesty. Thank you for sharing your art jack.

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Is it just me or have the last few "updates" not contained any update at all...?

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It's just you. I promise.

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Thought so, I picked a bad week to stop sniffing glue..

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other than the faces being distorted in most of the comics being kind of a turn off, other than that, good work.

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nice 冲冲冲

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looks like there are 36 images

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It's sad then people can't masturbate unless the find some magic book or another artifact.

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Uhh, can anyone wank to this..? The expressions are so exaggerated that it seems more like an actual horror story than a sexy one.
I'm getting the feeling that this is yet another 3D story that doesn't try to be porn, but a "comic with some sexy bits in it".

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Wooow !!! Good job !!!

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I follow this guy on patreon, and let me tell you the story evolves greatly. Its already one of my favorites. Good job @jackthemonkey

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插个眼。到下一次更新就知道多久更新一次了

23 day . Finally updated . !

Last edited on 24 September 2021, 11:11.

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This is how you do a proper corruption story, delay it have the character go through doubt reach out for help to maybe get back to where they were and then have them eventually double down on the corruption

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I usually don't care for 3D but I quite enjoyed this.

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Just want to say that I vehemently disagree with everyone who has complained about the faces/expressions. You have a unique way of doing them and so far I love them. Maybe I've just watched too much porn, but I've seen the boring vanilla bs people cheer for and it's 99% of the content out there. It's rare to find an artist that breaks the mold.

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还没完？？

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Kinda sad that 1/5th of the pictures are just chapter covers. At least they were moved at the end, but you come thinking 99 pages of content and it's 81 and from those another 11 are previews most of which have already appeared in the main story

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19 cells of nothing

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You might consider being a bit more generous with your artwork. Giving us less than a new page a week when you are almost 20 chapters ahead on your premium content can be perceived as stingy to some. Most asking for donations or subscriptions seem to be 1-2 chapters behind (or providing lower resolutions) for the free content.

Well, it's your art, and the story and artwork are pretty decent so far. Good luck, and looking forward to your future (drip) releases! Thank you!

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For anyone just now seeing this do yourself a favor and go read this instead.

https://e-hentai.org/g/2272327/b9deceef6e/

It's hasn't been updated since 2022-07-14, but it's further along the story. The author is posting side panels as full pages here to pad the runtime on this gallery.

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You are mistaken. I post a few pages once or twice a month. The are just seen after the last page of the story, not at the end of the gallery. So maybe you miss them.

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@royal.mist he got it nuked

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@JackTheMonkey,

Was that in response to my post? Okay then. Let's do the math, shall we?

When was this comic first shared with this site? Mid 2020? Or before?

How many pages (other than the title pages or non-art pages) have been posted? There's 112 pages here. But 21 are non-art or title pages. And 11 pages are promotional teasers. But even if we include the teasers, that's 91 pages for roughly the last 150 weeks. I'll let the math wizards figure out the ratio there.

So, how was I mistaken?

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Yeah looking at WarpedJ's comments he's not wrong especially given I personally Patron CambrianBeckets fanfiction and even with his original fanfiction he only keeps the last 6 chapters Patron exclusive and even then it'll be for a set amount of time when he finishes the story

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@JackTheMonkey Hell no, not joining your patreon, it's way too greedy. This isn't available until the $14cdn tier. Worse, the older stuff costs 28.

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That makes me sad. If it's not free, I'm greedy? Right? Come on. I work 12-hour days to make bills and rent, and half of it goes right back into it making it happen. I don't do vacations, I literally can't afford to stop. I'm not some rich dude trying to fuck you over. FAR FAR from it. There are many artists that don't even make it free... ever. They only charge for it... which is basic shit. Posting it on here is just something I enjoy. I get most of my traffic from DA and art trades from other artists. Also, let's not pretend like we don't know that you can find EVERYTHING for free if you wanted to. Patreon is for people who appreciate, and want it to continue... that's it.

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@jackthemonkey the issue I think he's trying to point out is that you're way too stingy with what you release publicly. You're probably, what, a year and half or two years behind on posting this story here? Public sites get a page a month or two from you on average. It's pretty greedy. There's only a couple artists I've ever come across that drip feed as badly as you do. It DOES come off as greedy

I can still go to the other gallery on here and read twice as many pages as this (don't get me started on your space wasting placards and previews that have have already)

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Oh, come on. I've been on this site for years and years, long before I was a content creator and I've never demanded or expected that from ANY artist. "You need to give more for free!" If you include all content creators, most DO NOT give most of their content for free. So no, posting 95% of your content for free is not some norm. Plainly, people want it, they expect to get it for free, and if it doesn't happen... anger. Maybe I shouldn't put anything on here at all, granted. But, I will take off the "space wasting placards", but I'm not going to sacrifice my livelihood because people feel they are entitled to more free stuff. And make no mistake, that's what I'd be doing. I see the bills, I see the numbers, I know the risks, I've seen the effects, I know what would happen to me and my family if I can't provide for them... you do not.

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The spread was better this is like some jag27 comic where the characters spend too long talking then well fucking

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Had a look at patreon coz wanted to all of their work, but the vault access is the same price of hogwarts legacy, guess i'll just fap from my broom. Love ur work but not that much. :x

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@jackthemonkey
I'm with ZSky on this one. There is plenty of free high quality porn comics available. My personal recommendation would be that if you want to sell your work you should find a publisher and print your comics as adult novels. Posting sneak peaks on a FREE site like this then asking 8$ per episode in a 36 Episode comic is just a good way to piss people off.

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Kudos, the blank cells have been removed.

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