My first time translating a doujin.
There might be some mistakes here but I do hope people can finally enjoy this work from Natsu no Oyatsu since the previous translation was absolute garbage.
This deserved a proper translation and I hope I did the job.

02
OG:...って そっか...
TL:Hmm...
ED:She remembered there was a spare fan

03
OG:あれー！？
TL:Found it!
ED:She didn't find it. She's expressing her surprise. You can see next panel they're sweating bullets.

04
OG:まぁ... 浴びれないこともないか...
TL:I guess I won't be able to take a bath...
He's saying it's not like he can't take a bath.

04
OG:こうするの
TL:Do this
ED:Do it like this.

05
OG:そうかな...
TL:That's not true...
ED:He's just wondering if her statement is true.

05
OG:肌だってスベスベだったし魅力的に思う人も多いって
TL:Your skin is smooth, and a lot of people find you attractive.
ED:He's still talking about her smooth skin.

06
OG:いいよ 前は
TL:It's fine...! Just do it like be-...
ED:He's talking about the front of his body.

07
OG:重力には勝てないみたい
TL:But I can't win against gravity.
ED:Missing みたい

07
OG:ね涼介もってみて
TL:Here Ryousuke, hold them.
ED:She's asking him to try holding her tits. It isn't an order.

08
OG:洗ってくれるの？
TL:Can you wash them for me?
ED:She's just asking him if he's going to wash her tits. It isn't a request.

13
OG:お母さんなんかでこんなに大きくして...♡
TL:Did you get so big because of your mother...?♡
ED:She's expressing her disbelief.

15
OG:小さい頃は可愛かったんだから
TL:And you were so cute when you were little.
ED: 可愛い as in tiny. Being cute doesn’t have anything to do with fitting inside a vagina.

20
OG:俺もお母さんの汗とか全然嫌いじゃないから
TL:I also don’t dislike anything about my mom’s body, not even your sweat.
ED:He’s just saying he doesn’t dislike her sweat.

21
OG:パンツで蒸れたお母さんの匂い
TL:Mom’s lewd scent
ED: No mention of her scent being lewd. Also missing パンツで蒸れた

21
OG:一気に部屋に充満した
TL:It’s filling the entire room.
ED:Missing 一気に. Also past tense.

24
OG:出産とは違う 逆の喜び
TL:This pleasure it’s different from childbirth.
ED: 喜び as in happiness. I doubt she experienced pleasure when she delivered lol.

Last edited on 14 April 2024, 19:48.

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Idk if it's just me but the son is, like... unusually handsome for an h-manga that's not yaoi?

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appreciate it cybeast93
Updated it.

15: i am pretty sure she was talking about the MC when he was a baby. since in the next page the son is asking his mom how he is now (still cute?) and she starts to answer him.

20: The son said to his mom "You drank my sperm earlier, didnt you?" and because of the "とか" I went with that sentence. "Thats why mom I also dont dislike anything about your body such as your sweat either".

21: Idk how to translate that one since it would mean something like "The smell of momy mom's stewed pussy from inside her panties quickly filled the room"... kinda sounds weird, the result basically is that her scent thats coming out from her panties filled the room. So I just described it as a lewd scent which it is kinda indirectly saying it.

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>Updated in a timely manner after criticism was given in a timely manner
Sugoi.

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#make-hentai-MCs-sexy-again

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They gonna die of dehydration

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