Is this made using Stable diffusion? Cause to be honest, your gens are not bad. But you writing is really awful. It's like you used powerpoint to make those speech bubble, you know you can pirate photoshop right?

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I was about to say something about the 3 fingered claw on page 13, but then I noticed how she has just broken both her legs at the knee on page 12.

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Thank you all for your comments. Kyssaselka On page 13 she is holding his legs, it's called amazon position :3

Labelle yes you are right it's a stable diffusion. And no I am using photopea (Legal open code version of photoshop). Could you please be more specific about what is wrong with my speech bubble and which ones you think would fit better here?
As for the writing, I'm training a linguistic model to write dialog to make it more sexy and lively. Unfortunately, untrained models can only generate so much.

Concerned readers, could you tell me. What do you think of the opening exposition on pages 2-4.
Is it good or is it bad and I need to improve it?
I hope that people of all views on my work will comment, so that I can better understand my strengths and weaknesses and so that my work becomes much more enjoyable for you

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The dialogue is AI as well? No wonder it's so verbose.

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