003
OG: うん、埋め合わせちゃんとするからまた今度ね〜
TL: "I'll see you next time"
ED: missing first half, she's saying she'll make up for it next time

OG: な〜んて嘘♡友達と遊ぶのも大事だけど
TL: "Playing with friends is great..."
ED: missing first half, she's lying

006
OG: オジサンのチンポいつみてもすごおい♡
TL: "Old men's dicks are always so splendid"
ED: she's talking about him specifically (directly related to next bubble)

OG: んっ気持ちいいよ真由ちゃんはどうだい
TL: "It's so thick"
ED: this line is completely made up, he asks her a question

007
OG: んぁ♡チンボ♡チンポ♡気持ちイイ♡センズリ止まらなぁい♡
TL: "I can't stop thinking about your dick"
ED: she's talking about stroking herself not thinking about his dick (directly related to next bubble)

008
OG: 効いてるｘうキてるよぉ♡頭の中幸せぇ♡♡
TL: "It's working, it's working, it's working, it's working"
ED: missing half of the line, she describes how she's feeling

009
OG: じゃあ入れるぞ
TL: "Hurry, stick it in!"
ED: wrong speaker

010
OG: マンコ♡♡ゴリゴリしてるぅ♡
TL: "My pussy is in the middle of the ecstasy!"
ED: she's talking about his actions

OG: あっ♡あっ♡あっ♡あっ♡チンポ良いぃぃ
TL: "My cock feels good! AH!"
ED: she's talking about his cock

011
OG: おっほ♡おほっはぁん♡ぁぁイクイクっ♡マンコとチンポイクぅ♡
TL: "Ah-yeash I love it! I fucking love it!"
ED: she's talking about cumming from both her pussy and cock

OG: アハァ…♡キメパコ最高
TL: "Ahhh...you're the best, daddy.."
ED: she's talking about getting fucked under the influence

a lot of the rewrites continue on later pages etc

Base +38, Scumbini +48, soretu +6, junk777 +12, Holovox +9, jason12052011 +7, Loosperdidos12 +7, zeroab2 +6, MACZ2021 +6, jessica702 +12

U should a another with her daddy’s but also being a crossdressing sissy for her cock

Base +6, leftrightup -6

Man normally i see a torrent for these things like the moment they get uploaded but its already been a couple days and nothing.

Base +6