Suisei Jowo: https://e-hentai.org/g/2890114/f844f85825/

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Tagging rough translation:

01
OG:きつい
TL:No way...
ED:Doesn't mean "no way".

01
OG:大丈夫？疲れたなら交代する？
TL:Are you okay? Daisaten? If you're bored, shall we switch?
ED: Not "bored". Also, your MTL made up "Daisaten".

01
OG:う...うぅん大丈夫
TL:Ye...Yeah, I'm okay.
ED:The opposite.

02
OG:朝練お疲れ
TL:Good job
ED:Missing 朝練

03
OG:スケベ
TL:Oh shit!
ED:Made up line.

04
OG:えーみんなも知っていると思うけど教育こども妊娠法が施行されました
TL:I think everyone is aware, but the education for children pregnancy law has been enacted.
ED:Missing えー,教育こども妊娠 isn't education for children pregnancy, 施行 doesn't mean "enacted".

04
OG:我が校でも今月から在学中 女子生徒の妊娠 出産が義務化されます
TL:In our school as well, starting from this month, it will be mandatory for female students to report pregnancies and births during their
ED:"Report" isn't the right word in this line. You also left the translation incomplete.

06
OG:中学二年生でこのおっぱいはえっちですね
TL:You're just a second year junior high but your boobs are already this naughty.
ED:The teacher isn't saying anything about her boobs being too naughty.

06
OG:いいですよピンク色の乳首が勃起しています
TL:It's okay, your pink nipples are erect.
ED:いいですよ doesn't mean "it's okay" in this case. "It's okay" means something else in English anyway.

07
OG:弾力があってキメ細かい しっとりと手に吸い付いてくる...
TL:With elasticity and a fine texture, it feels moist and draws you in...
ED:しっとりと is drescribing 手に吸い付いてくる. Also missing 手

07
OG:13歳らしいいいおっぱいですよこれは...
TL:These are nice breasts for a 13 year old...
ED:He isn't saying they're nice for a 13 year old. It's the opposite.

07
OG:優等生ですね では次に進みましょうか
TL:You're sexually mature, let's move on to the next step, shall we?
ED:優等生 doesn't mean sexually mature.

07
OG:それでは これから3人にはこども尿判定を受けてもらいます
TL:Well then, now let's have you undergo a child urine test.
ED:尿判定 isn't child urine test. You make it sound like they're gonna get pregnancy tests.

07
OG:おしっこの飛び方で元気な赤ちゃんを産めるか判定できるんですよ
TL:With this we can determine if you can give birth to a healthy baby based on how your urine flows.
ED:Not "flows".

07
OG:こ ここでですか！？
TL:Right there?
ED:She's stammering. ここで isn't "there". ここに and ここで aren't the same thing.

08
OG:やだぁ... しんじゃう...
TL:No... I rather die...
ED:She isn't saying she'd rather die.

08
OG:大丈夫 萌夏 美月 できるよね？
TL:It's okay, I'm sure Moeka & Mitsuki can do it.
ED:She isn't talking to the teacher.

08
OG:では三名は準備してください
TL:Well then, please go ahead
ED:He isn't telling them to go ahead

Last edited on 21 April 2024, 17:44.

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