https://e-hentai.org/s/e129a1d415/2896914-12
*heavy breathing*
Father-in-law...Why would you do such a thing?
Ugh," she groaned.

Ah yes. Machine translations are already bad enough, but having a Patreon and ask people for money? lol

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https://e-hentai.org/s/7fbfc298e4/2896914-38

"*"

Peak story right there

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it's also using the chinese scans at the beginning... https://e-hentai.org/g/2893583/c72a40aa32/

005
OG: この
TL: "Take this!"
ED: this is connected to the next bubble, he's not just saying "take this" out of nowhere

006
OG: やっと行った．．．
TL: "We finally made it..." she whispered, tears streaming down her face as we reached our destination
ED: this is rewrite level...he's relieved that his dad's gone

OG: はは．．．また響にカッコ悪い所見せちゃったな
TL: "Haha...I guess I showed off my uncool side to kyō again."
ED: name change

OG: そうそれが剣一だ
TL: "Well, that's just who you are, Kenichi"
ED: she's isn't narrating to him

007
OG: 悲劇はまた起きた
TL: "Another tragedy has occurred, she said with a heavy heart"
ED: last part is rewritten

OG: お義母様が病で倒れたのだ
TL: "My mother-in-law has fallen ill, he said with a heavy heart"
ED: she's still the one narrating and the last part is rewritten

OG: 瀬戸際に豪田家に嫁いだ者に受け継がれている紅色のリボンと剣一を私に託し静かに息を引き取った
TL: "As she married into the goda family on the brink of crisis, she entrusted me with the crimson ribbon and sword, which have been passed down to those who wed into the family. With a peaceful breath, she quietly left this world."
ED: the "sword" is her fiance's name. and a bunch of the beginning is rewritten as you can probably imagine

008
OG: 少しでも豪田家の一員として力になれるように
TL: "I want to contribute as much as I can as a member of the Ohta family"
ED: name change

OG: 努力を重ねていき
TL: "Let's keep pushing ourselves to new heights, one step at a time"
ED: this is about her continued effort (related to next bubble)

OG: そのおかげか剣一やお義父様も次第に元気を取り戻していった
TL: "Thanks to that, Kenichi and even your father-in-law gradually regained their vigor,' she said with a smile."
ED: she is still the narrator

010
OG: 私の純潔を奪ったのは将来の約束を誓った剣一ではなく．．．
TL: "It wasn't Shouichi, who promised me a bright future, that took away my innocence..."
ED: name change

011
OG: ヤッヤメッ…ッお義父さまッッヤッ…
TL: N/A

OG: 厳しくも愛情を注いでくれて本当の父のように接してくれたお義父様がどうして．．．
TL: "My father-in-law, who treated me like his own son with a strict yet loving hand, how could he..."
ED: she's still the narrator

OG: 一度ならず二度．．．数えることが出来ない程私は犯され
TL: "Not just once, but twice...I lost count of how many times I was violated"
ED: the beginning sounds like the number of times she lost count. she's saying she was violated several times

012
OG: ううっ
TL: "Ugh she groaned"
ED: wrong speaker

etc

Last edited on 22 April 2024, 20:17.

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I saw Reddit and I instantly coomed.

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Always gotta be that father-in-law hehe

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i asked for a translation, but not like this

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Head mod of r/netorare here, not sure how I feel about the huge advert page at the start, but thanks I guess. lol

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piece of shit

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i am literally better off reading the raws even though i do not understand Chinese,Thai and Japanese

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Please someone correct its grammar.

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@henlesko

thanks for uploading complete trash you loser

of course you're a fucking loser redditor. of course you are

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fuck off redditcuck

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Horrible translation, but meh, i just look at pictures...

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Plebbit mod is proud of this trash LMAO

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@waitugreat

MTL with patreon is infact normal in "low-effort" web novel translations... I know I know it shouldnt be the case nor should be tolerated but it is

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as expected of redditor, didn't disappoint

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This is fucking retarded

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