Wow totally unexpected, bravo... What a genius writing...
Also, I like how they made shouma look bad here to justify what is happening lol.

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Man the author trying too hard to turn the rapist coach into a knight in shining armor. Trashing Shouma just so to make the coach the only good guy who can save her. Trying to give him a redemption arc at this point, goes beyond bad writing !

Last edited on 25 April 2024, 23:07.

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It's here! Man, time flies ever since exo first shared to me this chapter. Personally, I am happy (again, I read this with tags in mind). It took a while, an actual arc and a new antagonist for my ship to happen. Readers expected it to happen (both the haters and the fans), mostly the saving so it still annoyed me it took a lot of chapters to get here. Since I'm sharing my thoughts here already, might as well say I would've preferred sensei milked the Shoma affair scenario (it still feels off for me he actually can pull it off) instead of introducing Ishikawa (which is hilarious finding out on Twitter, Ishikawa actually has a sole JP fan!). I'm much more curious how... Niimi grew up into... this. How can someone who used to be incredibly shy got the guts to send a taken woman a pic of herself and said taken woman's unconscious, naked bf together in a photo (but apparently according to exo's summary, she admitted it was fake and to rile up Yuki)? Was the relationship with Kuruso (only a small panel this chapter but I can tell he's still handsome) that bad that 5, maybe 10 years later, she reconnects with an ex? I mean, I don't blame her given the way they got together and broke up wasn't that bad and even I have to admit adult Shoma's drip is amazing. Not enough for me to be horny but good for him appearance wise. Can't say the same for Coach's facial wrinkles (and apparently admitting this chapter he gained a bit of fat). Smut was good, though honestly, I'm also not a fan of adult Yuki's appearance. The bigger chest size isn't really that attractive for me to begin with. The comfort panels are great though, could be better when the tankoubon updates and reaches this part (so many weird facial shapes and expressions). I'm actually happy to see the chibi faces again as well.

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this...this is just bad...unless youre wearing rose tinted glasses like Hypothon any sane person would see this is just horrible writing. 4 years and 36 fucking chapters of Yuki having peak woman moments ☕.

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@pleomaxx that guy is such a fanboy it needs to be studied

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It was a bad writing from beginning to end. The "plot twist" is just ridiculous.

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This is peak trash, the fact this is 36 chapters now makes me wonder what the artist is smoking and what the ones who like it are on.

Just let the rapist (he's a rapist even if you make him look all good) and the dumb easy bitch live their lives together and let Shouma have his happy ending.

Did the author have some trauma with someone named Shouma because this is just trash.

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