Perfect timing xD

I don't understand his playing hard to get but then all of a sudden asking her to play with herself in front of him :/

EDIT: Translations seems really off the mark in places. Most jarring had to be when she calls him "babe" lol But there's a few other bad spots, too.

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What a shit tl, damn.

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This translation gave me a stroke.

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very bad....

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Butchering Hyji's work like that is a goddamn crime.

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This stink of MTL

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001
OG: 灰司
TL: "Gray Master"
ED: this is the author

002
OG: 前回まで
TL: N/A

002
OG: N/A
TL: "And so, the tale of mama and her son, entangled in a web of passion, unfolds in the sultry heat of a July evening."
ED: made up line

OG: 望
TL: N/A

OG: 菜穂
TL: N/A

OG: 夫
TL: N/A

006
OG: N/A
TL: "Consistency is key, my friend."
ED: made up line

011
OG: ジュン…
TL: June 90000
ED: this is sfx

012
OG: お母さんにその気があればいつかお母ちんから誘ってくるはず
TL: "If your mom's got the hots for it, she'll definitely invite you someday."
ED: he's talking abou this own mom

OG: 、、、だけど
TL: N/A

014
OG: 僕から行かない限りお母さんから来ることはない
TL: "I'm the one who has to go to you after school, or else mom won't come"
ED: nonsensical TL

OG: それを見ながら僕もオナニーしてみたいっていうかｗ
TL: "I mean, it's not like I wanna jerk off while watching that!!"
ED: he says the opposite

015
OG: へへっｗ
TL: 7 7
ED: these aren't numbers

018
OG: 番うわよ！あんたが、あっ
TL: "Watch out! It's coming this way!"
ED: made up line, she's not warning him about anything

019
OG: いや！これ腰浮いちゃう！クリにっあ！
TL: "No! My hips are floating! Right on the spot!"
ED: she isn't saying her hips are floating

OG: お母さん気に入ったみたいだねでもまだバイブ動いてないよ？
TL: "Looks like mom's into it. But is the vibrator still not working?"
ED: he's not asking about it not working

etc and a lot more rewrites in between

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Amazing work

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This was painful to read in places. "ding dong and hoo ha?" really nigga.

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The translation is horrible, but the story also makes no sense. This part of the story should have happened much sooner, not at this point. It makes no sense that they got to the point they were in the previous chapter and then they regressed to this? Was the author drunk? WTF happened?!

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