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Wow so it really was just a dream? kinda disappointing it didnt actually happen...

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i only read the first few pages but fyi

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OG: 這樣可以了吧
TL: "It's alright"
ED: she isn't her saying it's alright. she's asking if what they did was enough

OG: 再不快點出去桐人就要起疑心了
TL: "if you didn't came[sic] quickly Kirito-kun would get suspicious"
ED: she's not talking about him cumming, she's telling him to hurry and leave

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Thanks rsx205 for the heads up on page 8 (07), if anyone finds another error please let me know

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Wait, so he hasn’t actually fucked her once?

How dissatisfying lol

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I don't know if it's an error, but pg 20 "young people are young" does have a "people die when they are killed" quality to it.

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>nishida: 0 times
Fym nigga? Chapter 2 exist.

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@Dr.Pavel

I think the implication is that he ALSO dreamed that up. Honestly, perfectly fitting given how the original 'joke' this artist went with for Nishida trying to get Asuna back in SAO went XD

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@alcantarilla
Buddy, the last page in chapter 2 literally show Asuna with semen leaking out of her legs and her muttering that she's glad Nishida didn't remember anything that had happened last night. And this sequence happend AFTER Nishida had woken up and left Asuna's house.

"Another dream" my ass.

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@Dr.Pavel

*shrugs* Dude, I'm not the author nor the artist, if you wanna complain about plot-holes take it up with them. That said, looking at said last page in chapter 2 again, it's entirely possible that's just Asuna's love juices rather than semen if you don't wanna think of it as a full retcon.

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it was asuna love juice there's a panel she was touching her self but i think author did mentioned he will do some explation why nishida had 0 sex with asuna.

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I have a weakness for Asuna x Nishida. Old men need love too.

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