This Title by hisamaru hajime struck me as rather sexy and i noticed their was no english translation , so this is my edit of "saimin apuri de！～ bou oni no zyoou wo niku bin oni ni si te mi ta" iv colorized it , translated it and decensored it as best i could . I hope you all enjoy and i do hope you have all been doing well , their is so much craziness in this world , don't forget to look after yourselves <3

Coloring and decensor is pretty good! Translation less so, and I think you know how bad the text editing is, but a very respectable first effort, overall. I hope keep doing these, you have definite potential! <3

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you used the chinese scan instead of the raw

001
OG: ウェーイオタク君見てる〜？これ言ってみたかったんだよねｗぎゃはｗ
TL: "Hello everyone, how many guys are watching"
ED: she has something to tell the observing otaku

OG: 君かわいいね俺の肉便器にしてやるよ
TL: "you look good enough for tonight"
ED: he's explicit about turning her into a cum dump (related to pun in title and next page)

OG: と声をかけてきたんじゃ 最初こそ無礼な事じゃと無視しようど思ったのだが
TL: "suddenly approached me, i was going to ignore him but......"
ED: missing middle portion, her initial thoughts on the interaction

OG: ちょっと待って！これ見たら絶対肉便器になりたくなるから！見てみ？ｗｗｗ
TL: "would you at least read this lady , it will change your mind."
ED: he's more insistent in his tone and confident in its efficacy

OG: すまほの画面を気づいたんじゃ
TL: "After reading that I immediately realized my mistake."
ED: she's just saying she noticed the phone screen

OG: おぬししつこい…ぞ…？
TL: "So how about you give me a proper apology now?"
ED: wrong speaker, she's annoyed with him

002
OG: せっかくわらわを肉便器をするなどとわらわにとって利点しかない魅力的な提案をしてくれたのに…
TL: "Obviously your proposal has many benefits for me such as becoming[sic] a humans[sic] toilet."
ED: missing first part of line, she mentions the effort he went through to make the proposal

OG: いや～角生えてるのはなんかのコスプレかと思ったらマジモンの鬼でしかも女王とかなんとかいうし
TL: "Wow , I Thought you were just some slut in cosplay but it turns out your[sic] spooky royalty ."
ED: he's not calling her spooky royalty, he recognizes her as some kind of demon queen

OG: ちょうどいいから便器の「器」の字を鬼にして「肉便鬼」に改名させたからみんな前の名前は忘れてねｗｗｗｗ
TL: "It doesnt[sic]matter all you are now is my bitch."
ED: completely made up, he's talking about her becoming his demon cum dump (related to pun in title)

OG: いい名前じゃろ！わらわも前の名前より気に入っておるおぬしらもねらわのことを今後は「肉便鬼」と呼んでくれ！よろしくの！
TL: "thanks! I like being your bitch more than being a queen."
ED: she's accepting the title change (related to pun in title) and likes it better than her old name

OG: で、しかもよく聞いたら結構人気の配信者らしいじゃん
TL: "Also while you are on my computer check thi sout I was a popular streamer as well."
ED: wrong speaker

OG: そんなんリスナー君たちに見せびらかｓ…コホンオカズのおすそ分けするしかないじゃん？って事で～…
TL: "Well you can consider me your career manager now, I will take care of your loyal fans."
ED: he's talking about sharing content with the viewers

etc

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001 "this humans cumdumpster"
001 "would you at least read this lady ,"
002 "becomeing"
002 "humans toilet"
002 "It doesnt matter all"
002 "you are now is my bitch"
003 "its im fucking"
003 "Dont cum"
003 "Your getting it all over the place"
003 "its your room"
003 "its not like i care"

etc

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@rsx205 the Chinese scan is the only version iv seen , were can i even find the raw?

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https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/114113788

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@rsx205 ok thanks ill add this to the list of places to check for stuff like this , probably should have already had an account on here from the looks of it. Also ill fix a lot of the mistakes your pointed out , but some of them i just made up because their was no room to fit the actual dialog.

Last edited on 26 April 2024, 20:50.

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