He's not wrong, a bush hides the mystery. If the mystery is revealed then whats the need of the bush? A half decoration? You don't know the beauty of the bush and the layer of beauty and mystery it has. The tuft of hair on top should be layered or drawn in a way that draws the reader to it, a simple glance should be enticed and not rolled over like the image is doing. If it was covered you'll be thinking in your mind what her clit and pussy would look like. Imagination is key on the aspects of drawing a person with a unique design like a bush.
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