The 3d models aren't bad (not great, but not bad), the paneling/arrangement is fine, and the typesetting is actually pretty decent.

HOWEVER, this writing is among the worst English I've read. Nearly every single page has some terrible grammar or some strange thing that no one would ever say.

I'm getting some serious Jojo Duwang translation vibes.

"But it's so thrill. But, I'm so scared to sown my own oats."
"Fucking horses! Is that a dream?"
"Fuck! This is so pleasantly! I can not do any more! Rocket on start!"
"So far, that you are a virgin. And after blowjob, technically, it remained. Only the entrance to the vagina is counted. Otherwise no way!"

I don't think porn's job is to make you laugh so hard that you can't finish lmao.

Base +6, Slifer83 +6