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Shizuki is cute, like my favorite Mogiki Hayami heroine(♂) cute so I decided to do it. That maternal feeling contrasted with those dead giveaway male features, those really soft facial features which is a new thing for the author, but really it's that sense of playfulness - everything about this character is perfect.

05/17/2024 -
adjusted grayscale values to match digital release
p3 - corrected いっちゃん新しい

05/16/2024 -

p21 - added missing page

05/16/2024 -

complete typsetting pass to make it less claustrophobic
p16 corrected マジ。。。ちのぽ入れたらスゲー良さそう to seriously...it looks like it would feel really good if a dick went in
p16 fixed spelling you're doing properly > you're doing it properly
p25 changed and what's that > and what's with that
p26 changed oh > kay for casual confirmation
p26 changed so that's why? > so that's why... you know?
p27 fixed spelling i'ts > it's

05/13/2024 -

p3 - added missing text
p3 - corrected oh as confirmation instead
p3 - corrected もう帰って来たのかよ as coming home earlier
p4 - corrected ゆさっ for breasts swaying
p5 - corrected いくら美人でも男だろ? for stating MC's denial
p5 - corrected モ口 to モロ
p6 - fixed spelling I'm > I
p6 - corrected 急に家に来るから何かと思えば to reflect second person
p6 - corrected そっか…おじさんでそんなふうになっちゃうんだ to reflect ojisan (self reference) and not ojisan (general term)
p8 - corrected ムいちゃおうかな… to reflect -kana uncertainty
p8 - corrected さっ as a stutter for 先
p8 - corrected 先っぽっ as tip

05/13/2024 - Fixed missing text on pages 4, 7, 8, 15, 20, 21, 23, 28. Whoops.

What the fuck is with your title gore, you asshole?

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I had a stroke reading your title. Damn that's long.

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The translation is kinda garbage 0.o
"Thanks, I hate it."

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@idmana13
I wonder why, do you think it might be the "ifyouwantrealtranslationswaitforarealtranslatoriaintreal" part in the TL name?

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This artist is one of the best. I swear. Ifs so cute.

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Since the titles been renamed no one is going to know what kind of translation this is. I will note there are blank and untranslated bubbles scattered throughout. I can't comment on the actual translation since I have not looked at the Japanese version, so Im just going to have to go with it being ether MTL or a rewrite due to the comments above, which is a shame, because with how its presented right now, no one is going to pick it up to translate, they will think it already is.

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Ugh shemale is already niche and a pain to search because folks can't differ it from futa and now here comes garbage translations ruining the chances of good ones

Yes its been proven that something already translated, even if again garbage, actually LOWERS the chance of it being ever translated right

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003
OG: え！！ナカノドリハザ買ったんだ！？
TL: N/A
ED: erased text

OG: いっちゃん新しいやつだよな！？
TL: "The new one in that really good series?"
ED: he's not calling it a really good series, he's using a contraction while asking if it's the newest one

OG: お、おう
TL: "O-oh"
ED: this is an affirmative response

OG: もう帰って来たのかよ…
TL: "Why did you come home"
ED: he's asking why he's already home

004
OG: ゆさ
TL: "Gentle looking"
ED: this is a jiggle

005
OG: おいおいンなわけねーって！いくら美人でも男だろ？
TL: "No no you've got it wrong. But I mean someone this beautiful is a man?"
ED: he's saying that no matter how beautiful she is she's still a man

OG: 例え美人でおっぱいデカくてモロ俺の好みのタイプでも…
TL: "Even if it's an absolute beauty with huge tits, and a lush wide mouth - the exact type I like"
ED: I assume your OCR couldn't distinguish between 口 and ロ which lead to the mouth part being made up

006
OG: 急に家に来るから何かと思えば…
TL: "I was wondering what was going on when he came to our house suddenly"
ED: she's talking about him directly

OG: そっか…おじさんでそんなふうになっちゃうんだ
TL: "I see...it became like that from an old man"
ED: she's not calling herself an old man

008
OG: ムいちゃおうかな…
TL: "It's peeling back"
ED: this isn't just a direct statement about it peeling back

OG: さっ
TL: "But"
ED: this is a stutter

OG: 先っぽっ
TL: "First"
ED: this is about his tip

edit: I explained the いっちゃん line already but all the context that's needed is contained in the line itself. I don't think the references you looked up are the problem, you just need to know how it's an adverb

Last edited on 18 May 2024, 04:51.

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Sick I'll implement these tonight. Is いっちゃん not slang for ichiban in this context? Every definition I looked up was giving me kansai slang for ichiban or something the speaker likes.

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Let's be real : the TL is kinda garbo, the cleaning feels weird, and the typesetting could use more works.

But the fact that blud picked up TL advice from the comment and actually redo their works instead of just leaving it be? That's a five start attitude on my book.

Keep up at it. All TLers went thru starting phase like this. Just keep on improving yourself.

-Edit-

My fucking god, madlad did it, the cleaning's much much much better than five days ago. Let me tell y'all, this release was rated 2 stars when it first popped out, and now it's 4.14 average?

Dude won the whole points solely from his work ethic.

Last edited on 17 May 2024, 10:56.

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You might want to level these scanned pages, the black point is definitely way off that it looks grey on the screen.
https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/dusting/#3.2
https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/cleaning/level

You can use the official storefront sample images as the target for the gamma (middle arrow), though ideally you should just tweak the brightness curve instead of plain leveling.
https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=2369314

EDIT:
>Is いっちゃん not slang for ichiban in this context?
Yes, it's a contraction of いちばん and you should recheck the definition of 一番新しい if haven't catch what rsx205 meant.

Last edited on 16 May 2024, 16:08.

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Oh I see this wasn't a digital release. Alright let me look into this eventually.

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Page 21 is missing

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Fixed, thanks.

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Appreciate you taking the criticism and doing the work.

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Yeah. Thanks for stopping by.

EDIT:
Ah I see it's not 一番好き in this context but purely the numeric quality of ichiban. Cool I'll change this in the next update.

Last edited on 17 May 2024, 02:01.

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Rated 5 stars because OP takes criticism and fixes his errors.
Keep up the good work lad!
Also, you may wanna unbold your font except in loud moments

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Thanks, unfortunately none of the text was bolded it's just the characteristic of the font.

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"it's bigger than my dad's!"

Bart Simpson: What an odd thing to say...

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token comment

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Armpit hair, ass hair, and pubes

Disgusting.

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Ok so, dude just went from overwhelmingly negative to mostly positive ?

Damn, that's a dedication. I'll give you 5 stars.

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So this is final one? No more v2?

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