002
OG: あーかったりい
TL: "It's so hot"
ED: this isn't about the weather

OG: おい！そこのハゲ塗料缶のそばでタバコ吸うんじゃねえ
TL: "Hey! Don't smoke over there by those bald paint cans"
ED: "those bald paint cans"?

003
OG: 総合運動公園
TL: "Comprehensive Sports Park"
ED: the park's not comprehensive

004
OG: 結衣！結衣！逆転したようえーん
TL: "Yui! Yui! It's like a comeback. yay!"
ED: she's not saying it's "like" a comeback

OG: もう早紀ったら何も泣かなくてもいいじゃない
TL: "You don't have to cry anymore, Saki"
ED: she's not saying "anymore" esp since she just started crying

006
OG: …言われなくてもちゃんと見てるわよ
TL: "...I don't need to be told I'm watching properly, you know"
ED: this makes no sense, she's not talking about being told she's watching

OG: 急で悪いけどあなたには１、２年生部員のまとめ役をお願いしたいの
TL: "I'm sorry it's sudden but I'd like you to take on the role of coordinating the junior and senior members"
ED: specifically first and second years

009
OG: お前こそ俺が何をしたのか忘れたのね？
TL: "Do you even remember what you did?"
ED: he's not asking if she remembers what she did

010
OG: いやっ
TL: "Good guy"
ED: completely made up

011
OG: 手でしごくんだよ
TL: "You have to squeeze it with your hand"
ED: he's saying a little more than just "squeeze"

OG: なあに一発抜いたらすぐ解放してやっからよ
TL: "What? If you can finish it in one shot, I'll release you right away"
ED: this makes no sense, he's saying he'll let her go after he finishes once

etc

Base +38, blaqkthespian +6