you forgot to mark this as MTL unlike your other uploads

005
OG: 新たなる生が与えられることになりました
TL: "A new life."
ED: this is a complete statement

OG: できうる限り希望に沿いましょう
TL: "As much as you can, as much as you want."
ED: this is a complete sentence

OG: 本当になんでもいいんだな？
TL: "You really can do anything, don't you?"
ED: this makes no sense

OG: では俺を――
TL: "Then I'll do it."
ED: he's not saying he'll do anything

006
OG: "移付けおじさん"にしてくれ
TL: "Seeding uncle, please"
ED: to clarify, this is what he wants to be, he's not requesting his personal "seeding uncle"

007
OG: …は？
TL: "What is...?"
ED: huh?

OG: いやだから俺を
TL: "No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no"
ED: he's repeating his request

OG: “種付けおじさん”にしてくれと言っている
TL: He wants me to be a seeding uncle.
ED: who's "he"?

OG: 無論“動けるデブバージョン”で頼む
TL: "Of course, you can move in the fat version."
ED: he's specifying that he wants to be mobile while still being fat

OG: なんですって？
TL: "What is it?"
ED: she's asking what he's talking about

008
OG: 絶倫かつあっちのほうもデカめのマジカルチＯボを所望する
TL: "I want a magical cock that is absolutely huge and that way too."
ED: and what way?

OG: あとツルモチ肌とケツ毛の処理もセットで
TL: "And treatment of slippery skin and ass hair"
ED: he wants smooth skin and his ass hair removed

OG: イメージ伝わるかな？
TL: "Image set can it be transmitted?"
ED: he's wondering if she's getting the picture

OG: そんな俺の最期は誰に看取られることもない孤独で寂しい死に様だったのだろう？
TL: "I wonder if my last death was like a lonely and lonely death that no one would ever take care of?"
ED: this is a rhetorical question, but he's not wondering. he's flat out stating how pathetic his dying moments were

OG: あなたの認める勤勉の先の末路がそれだ
TL: "That's the end of your hard work"
ED: he's talking about the extent to which she recognized his efforts

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