(COMIC1☆24) [Futari Bocchi no Solitude (wano)] Ohime-sama ni Shite ne, Sensei. - お姫様にしてね、せんせい。 | Make Me A Princess, Sensei. (Blue Archive) (English) [The Alpha Archive] [Digital]

A translation book for character Misono Mika in the game Blue Archive. I hope you like it.
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About the "group": Hello everyone! I believe this is the first time I have upload something on this site. My name is Metaroid Alpha from Viet Nam, I work as a (part-time) translator/editor and do some analysing stuff revolving Blue Archive. As for the content, I will mainly focus on the Non-H side of the game (if I can get one of course). Hoping to learn more from all of the more experience translator in here.

If there any error or mistake, please comment down below.

(Oh and my waifu is Mika btw)

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Edit Section:

Ver 1:
- Rewrite lines (and fix spelling error) in Page 07, 19, 21 to have a better word flow.
- Fix a line that was left in Vietnamese in Page 20.
- Fix some major spelling error in page 12, 23, 27.

Ver 2:
- Rewrite the caution line in Page 03
- Rewrite line in Page 16: "You kidding me right!?..."

(I'm started to think that I need people to proofreading for me now...)

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Suport the Artist at:
- Pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/4087934
- MelonBook: https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=2375189
- X/Twitter: https://twitter.com/wano49
- RAW (E-Hentai): https://e-hentai.org/g/2909293/f432e11cb4/

Translate and Edit by: Metaroid Alpha.

kys YWNBAW

Base +11, nomanny +6, jack955 +6, MehMeher +9, KeiZis +5, Mioiento -6, dj756 -6, Elgatto12345 +6

I was wondering why the harsh post, so I opened up a random page. Here are some parts of page19:
"In the event that both Sensei of Schale has died and General Student Council President is absent,"
"It is expected to for an all-out war with Gehenna."
"And... The sky have..."
"The word is... About to ending..."
"All this thing... Sensei won't like it..."

English, motherfucker. Do you speak it?
And if not, why the fuck are you translating into it anyway?

Base +6, nomanny +6, MehMeher +9, Djsergio1 +6, KeiZis +5, dayfox99 +6, Forgotten logic +9, Teh_Red_Guy +12, nramember +14, Elgatto12345 +6

I can't tell what's worse, MTL'd botch jobs, mistranslated botch jobs due to ESL, or a mixture of both.

It's like you have the knowledge of NEITHER THE ENGLISH NOR JAPANESE LANGUAGE but you still crack on translating under the auspices of "it sounds right"

Base +7, nomanny +6, Beane +7, jack955 +6, kamisking +6, MehMeher +9, Elgatto12345 +6

Get a proper proofreader.

Base +6, nomanny +6, Quote Marks +10, MehMeher +9, Djsergio1 +6

Mika deserves better.

Base +6, MehMeher +9, BiggusDikkus +6, Djsergio1 +6, finnick8 +9, AdolTheDogiCrusher +6, malikski +6, l2ose +12, Copy-n-Paste +6, nramember +14, Elgatto12345 +6

This is too much good dose of mika, my tears won't stop, and i grateful for maximize her relationship into 50 above

Base +6, jack955 -6, MehMeher -9, Djsergio1 -6, KeiZis -5, dj756 -6, listerine -6, Elgatto12345 -6

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2909293/f432e11cb4/

Base +26, Elgatto12345 +6

Here's some advice before you ruin Mika's reputation further:
Don't bother translating if you can't go from Japanese straight to English. Your edit says you kept a line in that was Vietnamese, which implies you translated this from Japanese, to Vietnamese, then to English. Even if you're good at those, it would all read better if you only translate once, not twice.
And at the very least use the original language's work for your template so you can more easily catch these mistakes.

Base +3, BioTube +15, Elgatto12345 +6