Commenting for o:"rough grammar". Didn't grab everything from every page, but I did some of the worst/most-obvious to hit the 25% of pages for the tag
p3 "A Neet who play cosplay for interest." -> "who cosplays" "Concurrently be the Yuru-chara and the sales girl." -> "She's concurrently the Yuru-chara and a sales girl." I guess. "Really like having sex." -> "Really likes having sex."
"She was play as a actor of some" -> "She took a role as an actor" I guess. "Do something ero in order to" -> I don't even know, man. "But she still insist on not have sex with her firends." -> typo and needs to be reworded.
p4 "Although it still have some time for casual outfits," -> "Although I still have some time for casual outfits," I guess.
p6 "Someone said that "Didn't you have worn more erotic attires? "" -> "Someone said "Haven't you worn more erotic attires [before]?"".
p8 "Never can see those poses in sales evens and Cosplay field." -> "You can enver see these(?) poses at sales events and Cosplay events(?)."
p9 "Maybe is the time." -> "Maybe it's time."
p11 "Isn't that making some Dojin ROM or fan service special pictures?" I don't even know what this could be talking about.
p12 "It's just happened in fount of me!" -> "It's happening right in front of me!"
p14 "Yes... I'm focus on it!" -> "Yes... I'm focusing on it!" or something similar.