https://www.patreon.com/critblix

Ok, tried the game. It's good but the story flow and dialogue need a little work. You go from 0 to 100 too fast into slutting the girls and some of the dialogue has grammar errors. Also Grunkle Stan wanting to sell nude pics of Mabel is way too out of character in my opinion.
Still the game world is very well made and the bones of the game are great.

Base +6