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[Pyramid House (Muscleman)] Hoken Shitsu [First Rape] (I"s) [English] [Pyramid House]

[ピラミッドハウス (マッスルマン)] 保健室 (アイズ) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2010-10-26 21:36
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:12.12 MiB
Length:24 pages
Favorited:126 times
Rating:
84
Average: 3.98

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Posted on 26 October 2010, 22:31 by:   garsdal    PM
Score +173
good art, acceptable story, horrible English.
Posted on 27 October 2010, 00:09 by:   Iksrfo    PM
Score -7
I would definitely cansider this garbage.
Posted on 27 October 2010, 06:08 by:   Fiers    PM
Score +16
this is epicly funny
Posted on 27 October 2010, 06:12 by:   Shanghai    PM
Score +166
Reading this without laughing is a near impossibility.
Posted on 27 October 2010, 06:35 by:   smitna1    PM
Score +13
I lol'd.
Posted on 27 October 2010, 09:17 by:   ohmightycat    PM
Score +126
Was anybody else tempted to vote down the 'English' tag?
Posted on 27 October 2010, 16:54 by:   john_locke    PM
Score +6
did a 2 yo translate it....
Posted on 27 October 2010, 18:03 by:   AlMundo    PM
Score +43
Oh come on you can't call this English. It's just a machine translation by someone who knows absolutely no English otherwise he could have fixed the translation to make it sound more natural. Just a bunch of unrelated bubbles with some unrelated words in it.
I like the theme and the art is fine too but this translation makes it impossible for me to &ldquo;do ejaculation to my tissue and enter any sperms into it&rdquo;.
Posted on 27 October 2010, 17:33 by:   Sallein    PM
Score +15
Oh jeese this is some funny english translations.
Posted on 28 October 2010, 04:00 by:   753565    PM
Score -9
The english is so bad I had to stop at page 3. Man a blind, deaf, mute could translate better then this
Posted on 31 October 2010, 22:56 by:   FaTa001    PM
Score +56
This is the story of a schoolgirl who is raped by two boys who attend the same school as she does. A few things to consider: Art is acceptable, but the translation is machine made, which makes it possible to understand but at the same time takes the story down a few points since it&acute;s kinda funny how things are said. Therefore, if you are looking for good art I would say thumbs up, but if you are looking to buy into the whole rape story, well, it&acute;s going to be hard to do with this particular translation.
Posted on 07 December 2010, 19:00 by:   Scias85    PM
Score +32
This is not a fan translation, is the "for sell" version in m@niax english site. ENGRISH.
Posted on 28 November 2011, 16:30 by:   animefan1221    PM
Score +10
"Hey! I do ejaculation. Become pregnant." - p.17.
Funny shit. Have great engrish.
Posted on 08 June 2013, 07:15 by:   Xoe    PM
Score +4
First time a doujinshi preformed "mind break" on me.
Posted on 14 December 2016, 15:02 by:   jfragrettel    PM
Score +8
Good job, great translation, hopefully you can translate other works by this artist

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