This is a rewrite not a translation. If you don't like rewrites don't waste your time looking at it wait a minute it states in the title it is a rewrite so why have you come this far anyway. Why did you click on the link? I am not trying to fool anyone into thinking this is a translation. I provide the raw source so if you like it go find it here or elsewhere.

And yeah I know I suck, this is crap, I am a loser, I can't write, etc etc. Heard it all before and sure I will again. Thing is I don't care, I have lots of fans, and even if I didn't I still wouldn't care.

"I love you to sis."
"No matter what I do you he just thinks as me as his sister"
"They problem is I do."
That's just the first three pages.

What an idiot. I know these rewriters don't know Japanese, but they don't know any recognisable dialect of English either.
Apologies if EZ actually suffers dyslexia, but if you can't write English you shouldn't publish such painfully stupid text.
Hint: get a friend who is functionally literate to help and you might embarrass yourself less.
You do have friends?

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Atleast It got translated... If I read some wrong grammar, I can correct it inside my mind. EZ FTW!!

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My brain hurtz, even for a non-native English speaker like myself XD

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Great work like always EZ.

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raw https://e-hentai.org/s/9d142e98e5/286265-44 for for this crappy like always garbage

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@pusangcat:

English text =/= Translation

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karma is a great artist and this fucking asshole is ruining all.
rewrite?write ur own story fucker

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OH FUCK I AM CUMMING SIS!!!

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we need a rule that bans rewrites here.

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What a fuckin trap
i wanted loli

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This is a good rewrite i don't fucking care about the typo and i don't know why everyone bitch about this since it's just fap material.
Thanks EZwriter

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Judging from how old he became and since only 10 years passed, isn't this a father and daughter incest manga?

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Problems with this:
1)Bait and switch cover. Showing loli on the cover when it isn't loli is fucking bullshit.
2)Shitty rewrite. I generally prefer translations to rewrites anyway but this is just terrible even by the low standards of rewrites.

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In case anyone's like me and is wondering what this originally was, seeing as the link to the raw posted here goes to a removed gallery, this was originally from Karma's Yonayona | Night After Night tank. The title was "Bonding" and it was properly translated along with the entire tank.

As with many of these rewrites, the original is not incest.

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Need this material is Sub Spanish people. Is good. Thanks.

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I don't care about rewrites but when the only english version of a doujin IS a REWRITE...that's annoying..

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@ Zaphod; I will take ez over your useless 'friend' who can't translate hentai. fucking EOP

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