Ja (Raw) https://e-hentai.org/g/2755700/09f256ad44/
Translation source https://kagamihara.donmai.us/pools/20620 Big thanks to Levander!
Typesetted as part of a bounty https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=24610

Suika vore
page 5 missing text bubble

okay it's not just page 5.
you have to go over this again, it's a mess.

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Nice job, I like some of the fonts you used. But like The_Riddler69 said, there are a couple text bubbles that you cleaned and forgot to put the text in.

Also, this gallery is quite large. When editing the original files, you ended up turning them from Grayscale-mode to RGB-mode, which blew the size up from 180MB to 270MB. Not only would converting it back to Grayscale be a good choice, but you could also remove the alpha layer (that does add up to a megabyte per image) and consider changing the format from PNG to JPG (say, 90% quality), that would reduce this further to like 60MB with absolutely no perceptible quality loss.

NOTE: E-Hentai has a gallery update system, you don't have to make a brand new one, you can just edit this current gallery to replace old files with new.

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