Saki is enslaved by an under classmate and now he stretch his hand toward Aya as well

http://pervertedtranslator.blogspot.com/
for download

Really BAD choice for the font. = =

Base +8, RED=STAR +7, kafka75 +4, psicomenace +9, KCzz15 +18

Translation criticism: unchecked spelling, some bad default font. Plain forgot to translate some stuff.
Manga criticism: no story. Just some idiot doing two chicks. At least the art is decent.

Base +5, amt +3, Lolification +1, kafka75 +4, psicomenace -9, giant200 +5

I know you've already been linked to the Ero Otoko guide, but you might wanna try this site too.
http://www.unblessed.net/guide/main.html Comes with some nice fonts.
And for more good font choices, go here: http://www.blambot.com/fonts_dialogue.shtml

Even if your TL and spellchecking aren't perfect, having a good font should make up for some of it. Or you can always find an editor to hand a script to.

Base +9, kafka75 +4, psicomenace +9

Thank for the fonts, but I have no idea how to install them. And good criticism, I will try to improve myself.

Base +8, kafka75 +4, Hyoros +10

http://www.doujinshi.org/book/13566/Troublekko-~Saki--Aya~/
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/37917/7d0adef5a7/
Russian Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/820217/c0c3b4e23d/
Chinese Translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/538681/fa29e8a150/

Base +29

alt ENG TL by EHCOVE https://e-hentai.org/g/1463267/49c0b99efe/

Base +57