RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/3125871/03af6edbd6/
FANZA: https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_325807/

this is great. not that good but still a nice translation to see the time stop story.

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this is so fucking funny lmao

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逆天情侣，男的女的挨个被时停操了一顿

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画风好看又全彩还是时停本简直就是巅峰之作，只可惜第二话人家脚都送到嘴边了，你甚至不愿意舔一舔尝尝味道。

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This is a pretty readable translation, but there are a lot of small errors like incorrectly conjugated verbs (e.g. "she always stay" on page 27) or writing "alot" instead of "a lot". As a constructive suggestion, it might be a good idea to have a native English-speaker proofread your translations to avoid simple mistakes like these.

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Time stop is kind of a shitty genre but this is a genuine work of art.

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逆天剧情 逆天作画

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I really enjoyed the first story. It was pretty unique. I want to see more of those characters, their backstories, and their interactions.

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