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A promising new artist, a definitely an interesting take on the genre. In this one, brainwashing a woman and turning her into a sex toy is treated more like an expression of love than the typical "revenge plot" you see. Honestly, I really get it, but I imagine it'll miss the mark for some people.

As always, please post any mistakes in the comments, and I'll fix them as soon as I can.

I do appreciate this work, but IMO the best part of Mind Control/Hypno fetish is the fact the victim does not understand they are being taken advantage of. If the girl is okay with being mind controlled, that point is kinda lost

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Not to mention that despite her being ok with everything and loving him he still went with turning her in a sex doll. Like wtf shit wasted ending is that. You got your perfect girl whos now your wife doing everything you want and loving it and you and the best thing you can think of is turning her into a sex doll? go buy one if you want a emotionless sex doll. such a dumb and wasted potential ending. at least if they would have cut the confession part it would have made more sense but with that it makes no sense.

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Honestly, I took the sex doll thing as more temporary play than a permanent state of being, though that's just my personal interpretation. I guess you can see it either way.

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I appreciate that this has an actual plot, but I feel like it does a bit more tell than show.

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The use of the necklace in the end was unnecessary, the girl was already his out of pure love.

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why is the dude doing an ahegao face?

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She wanted him to take advantage of her after that.
She's conscious under the mind control.

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Men, I would not mind seeing the twink getting fucked.

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: Dude got the ace of jumping high athlete whom acept you with anything without mind control anymore.

: Reduce her to just being mindless sex doll and lower intelligent and probably can't do anything by herself again.

This one got skill issue to me.

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Just because you don't need to brainwash your partner into.a mindless sex doll doesn't mean you shouldn't (and she clearly wanted it too).

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It starts with profiles of three girls, and then 2/3 get basically no content.

Why even bother?

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did... did she commit suicide by brain wash?

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Doesn't meet the criteria for the pregnant tag.

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The girl wanting the mind control to continue is a rare and valuable trope that I hope we see more of!

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I've read guys opinions here, but for me the ending was an icing on the cake, and without it the ending would feel much more boring and cliched. It adds some betrayal notes, some spiciness of girl's complete conquer. That even tho she fell into him, he decided to transform her into a mere pleasure object. I liked the comic and hope to see more series ahead.

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I feel like ending on a wholesome note could have been more impactful considering that the protagonist did all of those lewd things to her out of a posessive expression of love, the path to heaven is made out of selfish intentions.

This feel like the author wanted to put more scenes but had to cut out a lot of content to finish yet 80 pages is a lot for a MC doujin. This story tooks its time to start with the MC and even explained a lil bit instead of just jumping into it which is respectable, i could feel the excitment of finally getting into the part where the girl gets controled. It may feel slow at the beginning and the guy narrating his actions in paralel may feel like one is getting blueballed from half of what is happening between scenes of longer transition.

I loved the text boxes with the different states of the girl tho i wish he did more with the sex-bot scene, expressionless girl doing hardcore sex is one of the best parts of the hypnosis theme. Also not sex-pet mode sadly, probably due to the lack of time i mentioned before.

Im looking forward to this guy's career as a Hypnosis/Brainwashing fetish focused artist. From what i read in his website it seems he wants to make a prequel about the sister.

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This is pretty damn good for a first doujin. And seeing as it's listed under a "Reizoku no Kubiwa" series in the author's DLSite, it seems he intends to make more stories featuring this mind control device.

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Its pretty good

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why not put slave collar on the shorter blond girl
what a shame.

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Really should have shown the sister being used more...

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there's actually more hypnosis concepts that could be used other than mindless doll - which is like the hottest basic trope

there's this concept I have in my mind for quite some times but see no one execute :

Rearrangenent of Authority: the girl puts the authority of the Master over herself. That means the girl could think, act and even live as herself, but whenever there's a decision and the Master has decided 1 way, even when her mind could think of all the logic on why the other way is better, her way automatically lose weight just because her way "does not favor Master's will".
Think of it like a scale and "Master's will" is one of the criteria with absolute weight, the slave girl weights the decision like normal, and the final conclusion comes to her mind is as normal as truth, her logic works and the way that Master has chosen is the best choice.

This has several levels of applications, however.

Level 1: The slave argue, think logically, still get her own answer, but Master's will still win => the slave can still raise up her idea if Master requested but only as information for Master to decide, she still act with Master's way

Level 2: Master choose the way, all other ways becomes invalid, the slave will think they are unsuitable to be chosen because they are not Master's way. This level is stronger due to it changes her feeling about her own way, when in comparison with Master's way, her way will become the wrong way in her mind. Not "I only do Master's way because it was forced by him" but "My way is wrong because it was not Master's will"

Level 3: In every decision in her mind, she would now consider "would this aligned with Master's will?" before even applying logic to it. This has effect on her thoughts, emotion, relation and action regardless. At this stage I dub it as Mind Slave, subjects with mind always think like a slave, always Master-first.

Danger levels
Level 4: The slave girl now does not form her own ideas if not specifically ordered to. Her intelligence intact, but she would not use them for her own sake if not ordered, as it's Master's property. At this stage her autonomy starting to lose since she cannot decide on her own, this would affect her daily life if Master doesn't have embedded order for her, something like "Whenever you have to make decisions on your own and without me around, think of the best solution logically and follow them". Even so, since life is full of decision with many different criteria, not always black or white, like one is better for relationship thna other, but the other has more outcome etc., Master's embedded order would most likely cause the slave to act out of character if it's not phrased good enough, she could choose to max-outcome always and ignore other decisions her normal self would consider, like choosing "fully focus on task" over "going out with colleague to deepen relationship with girl A B or C etc."

Level 5: The girl loses her sense of self, now she think herself as extension of Master, so there's no "slavegirl" no more, no feel, no "for me", no "me" no more, Master's order becomes truth, become her action, there's no "her decision" no more. This is borderline Identity Death, if this stage is kept permanently, it's Identity Death
example of this is DC's Darkseid using Anti-life Equation to turn all humans mind to be his extension

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