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goodbye Fauna i'll see you again on your next reincarnation

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@Mutsume I hear she's planted a lemon tree.

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I'm gonna miss her bros o7

Man, I'll always Love Fauna.

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Man, I love Fauna

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Just in time for graduation.

Thank you, Fauna.

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I've lost gallons to her

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I don't care about tagging rules. This should be tagged MILF

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UUUUUUUUUUUU

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I already know I'll get downvoted into oblivion for not just glazing the doujin and saying anything negative about it, but I like giving criticism and I want to give a serious review of this one.

I'll start with the pros cause there's less of them.

The art style looks pretty good, and while it may look kinda weird, I actually prefer that the guys are saplings and not just some random ugly men, and none of them are fat either.
Another one is, if we just ignore the first few pages, the saplings are mostly dominant which is hot.

Unfortunately, those are all the pros, now for the cons.

Right off the bat, Fauna is just COMPLETELY out of character. And no, I'm not talking about what she's doing in the doujin. Obviously, Fauna would never do this, but I'm talking about the personality he gave her and her attitude about and during everything.

I'm aware Fauna is not 100% pure and wholesome, but this is still way too much and just gross. Now, some will say, "it's hentai, it doesn't have to be canonical." While that's true, I don't see why you'd even draw a specific character and just make them act nothing like they do, especially since this guy is supposed to be a fan of Fauna. If I wanted see a whore getting fucked, I'd just look at a doujin of Marine or Risu, not Fauna.

The artist could've easily went with this whole "plot" while her still being in character. It would've been WAAAAY hotter if Fauna is actually embarrassed and nervous for what's about to happen to her, but nope. He just turned her into a complete whore, making her just smile and be smug for 99% of the doujin, even while being fucked.

None of the scenes are satisfying to look at really, just because of the way she's acting. In my opinion in least, the girl is supposed to be getting completely dominated during a gangbang, but here she is, just smiling and looking smug almost the entire time. I don't know about you, but it doesn't matter what the guy is doing, how rough he's fucking or how hard he's grabbing her body, if the girl is just smiling/being smug the whole time, that's just a massive turn off, and even more so is the guy is going all out like that. It just looks to me like the girl isn't feeling it at all and the guy most likely has a micropenis.

Pages 6 and 7 are just insanely cringe. Not only is she in control and not letting them cum, the saplings are also just doing nothing. Even if she's the one doing things, doesn't mean they can't do anything either. They could've at least grabbed her body somewhere, instead of just doing nothing or jacking off, which is one of the most boring thing ever in hentai, especially gangbangs.
Page 17 also looks super cringe because the blowjob guy isn't touching her anywhere at all. Just standing there doing nothing, while it would've been way hotter if he was grabbing her head. And of course, we also don't see him cum inside her mouth at any point again.

Another con is just the lack of double penetration. I would understand if there was only one guy at first, but then later more appeared, but no, we saw right off the bat that there's 5 of them. What's the point of there being a bunch of guys right off the bat, if we're just gonna watch them go one at a time while the rest are jacking off? Why would I even want to watch some guy jack off on her?
Out of the 20 pages, I'm not counting the first two and last two, there's only 5 pages of double penetration, and that's if you even want to count the spitroast scenes. That's definitely not enough for a gangbang hentai where there's a bunch of guys right off the bat. And unfortunately, even the double penetration scenes which DO exist, are disappointing. She doesn't have any hot or satisfying reactions to anything.

One thing that could've made them better is if he AT LEAST made her look nervous for getting fucked in multiple holes at the same time. At page 10, we see her getting spitroasted. What he could've done is zoom in on her face with the dick right next to it and show her looking nervous/scared to take it, cause she's already being fucked in the pussy. But nah, not only did it just look completely casual, it lasts for 1 page and we actually didn't even see the blowjob guy cum inside her mouth. On page 11, we just see her getting creampied and that's it. The blowjob guy just disappears, there's no cum in her mouth, no saliva around it, or anything. Not only is there nothing to indicate that the guy came inside her mouth, it just looks like the blowjob part never even happened. Which is kinda ironic cause on page 14, it says there's 3 cumshots in mouth, even though she doesn't let them cum when she's sucking their dicks at the beginning, the guy doesn't cum during the spitroast scene and there's just no cum in her mouth at any point. So, where are those 3 in her mouth, exactly?

And the double penetration part near the end isn't much better either. The dialogue makes it look like she isn't ready for that, maybe she's never done it before, but her facial expressions are not fitting at all. If it's her first time getting double penetrated in ass and pussy, she should be in pain, and not make whatever face that's supposed to be, probably some variation of ahegao. She's supposed have clenched teeth, eyebrows furrowed, one or both eyes closed, tears, things like that. This is one of the only things I was looking forward to in the full version of the doujin since there weren't any ass and pussy DP scenes in the first part, and it was disappointing. There's only 3 pages of it and she's not making any hot facial expressions at all.

The funny thing is, I actually talked to the artist about this. I didn't tell him exactly the same things as here, but I did mention my main points. I gave him the idea of Fauna not being used to ass and pussy DP and he said he liked it and that it sounds like s good idea, but he just didn't portray that here at all.
Those are not the facial expressions she should be making if she's not used to DP.

And this doesn't even make sense if we take his other doujin into account. In pages 23, 24 and 25 of it, she's actually making some hot facial expressions. Eyebrows furrowed and one eye closed at one point, making it look like she's in pain. And yet, she never made facial expressions like that when being fucked by multiple men. I'm not sure if this one is supposed to be a prequel or a sequal to the Kronii one. I could've sworn I've seen him say somewhere that it's a prequel, but all I'm seeing now is that it's a "side story". Well, either way, the way she's acting with 1 guy vs multiple guys doesn't make any sense regardless.

Another thing is at page 14, she changes her hair length and from some reason says "Let's spice things up and make round 2 a night to remember." which just doesn't make any sense. I'm not sure if it's just unrelated, but it almost sounds like she's trying to say it will be spicier or "more fun" with short hair, but that's just objectively not true. Even if you like it more, it can't be more fun cause the guys now lost something they could've grabbed during sex, which one of them did and it was actually one of the few hot scenes. So yeah, that dialogue doesn't really make sense. Not to mention that the long hair looks amazing and is insanely underrated, so it's a shame that he made it short in the second part.
Also, since I mentioned her design here, it's also disappointing that she has a bellybutton piercing. Didn't know where else to put this part.

Overall, I wish there was a nicer way to put this, this was just really disappointing. Pretty much the only good part was the art style, them being saplings and just a few specific pages. Her whole personality and the lack of double penetration ruins this whole thing. If I had to rate it out of 5, I'd give it a 2.

Which is a shame cause Fauna gangbang is rare, so I was excited to see a whole doujin dedicated to it, especially cause of the long hair at the beginning. And I'm pretty sure we'll never get anything similar now that she's gone.

But who knows, maybe the artist will draw a Kronii version with a bunch of men, and hopefully her reactions will be hot at least, since she was the nervous one in the first doujin.

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hey man im happy for you or sorry that happened to you

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Hey man im angry for you or excited that happened to you

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thanks, appreciate it! 🥂

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