This is my first time translating Doujinshi. I'm not good at Japanese so I used Google Translate to translate, if there are any mistakes, I hope everyone will understand.

Could you upload raw or give a link to it at least?

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we shall understand

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tag your shit man.

stuff starts as a girl being taken as a part time worker for a shota who wants a pet.
ends with her limbs amputated being treated as a doormat pleasuring an ugly old man.

TAG YOUR SHIT

Last edited on 21 February 2025, 14:55.

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Why do these MTL people always use Google Translate? As much as I dislike MTL, you do realize there are better softwares out there?

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agreed with Ohgodwhai
even as far as MTL goes, this is disappointingly rough. It at least needs an editing pass to make it sound reasonable.
eg pg 17 > Her: Excuse me for pussy poking
has traumatised me

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勾吧中文版怎么没了

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Thanks for the upload.

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As @ohgodwhai says, there are certainly much better software for translations out there.
Instead of Google Translate you could've used something like Google Gemini in AI Studio, or Grok, for a much better result. Or at least use DeepL, as it gives a much better list of alternative translations which could be applicable given the context. And these tools are all free as well.
But most of all the editing /typesetting is really shitty too, I mean... did you really have to use TImes New Roman for the whole thing? Any font like Wild Words, Anime Ace, or other manga fonts would've done the job. AND PLEASE GODDAMN CENTER ALIGN THE TEXT FIRST.

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