First, this should have been put unde "Manga" since that is what it is. Second, this is one of the most over the top stories I've seen yet - I'm still deciding on it.

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i have a bounty if you'll want to see more of this

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Translator who wrote the note on p5, you win the entire internet.

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well tralphaz, you should take a look at the game then, the newest one. Its really funny but hard to win too :)

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Crazy rance

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I like it!

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Very nicely done and I can barely wait to see more. One thing I should note, however is that on page six when he says "Ua ha ha", the translator corrected the phrase "Uriya" but if memory serves that's a common grunt/shout that Rance makes whenever he swings his sword or attacks.
Also, if it was intended for the text to be the sound of his laughter it should not be "Ua ha ha" but "Ga ha ha", which is Rance's distinctive laugh.
Not meaning to break balls or ruffle feathers, I just wanted to point those things out in case they would be helpful to the translator.

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