quick fix of an existing translation (shitty monologue font and untranslated cafe sign and ai slop credit page were pissing me off)

tankoubon version (better censoring, edited script):
https://e-hentai.org/s/befcad0de6/3994264-62

original translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/2648504/0c58ab854c/
raw link: https://e-hentai.org/s/eef7b37074/2624383-268

artist:
https://twitter.com/minamidausuke
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/87831901
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/circle/profile/=/maker_id/RG42056.html
https://www.dlsite.com/books/author/=/author_id/AJ013882

buy:
https://www.dlsite.com/books-touch/work/=/product_id/BJ01757714.html

Thank you for the translations. Minamida Usuke can draw some beautiful women. I hope he continues making manga for a long time.

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uh just clarifying this is a coffedrug/salamilid translation, the only stuff i did (besides redoing a lot of typesetting) was doing an untranslated sign and like 1 or 2 typos

Last edited on 22 March 2025, 06:15.

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Pretty good. Maybe zoom out on the camera a bit more. This is a little too gonzo.

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