Much improved version released: https://e-hentai.org/g/332418/65e9b1a536/

Yeah, so, when there's japanese text over the edge of the bubble, it kinda looks like crap if you don't redraw it.
It also looks like crap if you don't clean the text on the inside of the bubble, as after page 20 (did you get bored?)
Finally, the crappiness is compounded by that blind idiot translation.
Come on, guy, I know you can do better than this. Unless you're a quadruple amputee editing with your tongue... then I apologize.

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Eh, story is crap anyway. What's with this cliche sex craving thing? Seriously...

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Terrible translation as usual from CGRascal. His output quality varies so much, sometimes it's really good and sometimes you get this gibberish that makes no sense at all. The last releases were more of the latter sadly.

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i know we can't coun on hentai galleries to have decent storyline, but this is just plain stupid

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