I've seen translations of this story in various languages and found they all have many differences.
This made me check the original and try to make a more accurate English version.

Somebody didn't like the liberties taken with the first attempt. So here it is again, revised.

>but I managed to I hold back my feelings...
Dang it, how did I not notice that before??

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In other words you butchered the translation with google translate and decisively ensured that a proper translation will never be created? This is 2024. Anyone can run shit through image to image software and get a similarly butchered translation. Why do people do this???

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@TheGoodGiggle
How does this stop anyone? There was already another English version and that didn't stop me.

There are various duplicates of many other translated works too, each with its own flavor.

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Well if it's old enough and there is no interest... this one is from 2021 and I don't think there are translators willing to go back and do this one sadly, MTL translation are more toxic if they are for recent works like before the doujin has two years in publication, most translators will see it translated on ehentai and think it's done than see it's a MTL one, this happened a few times.

It's a little disappointing but I get why you did this, just wish it was more clear it's MTL with the title and description.

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People hating on MTL (sometime for good reason specially when it's a butchered work with no effort) are kinda ridiculous.

"Just wait for a proper translation" buddy it's a multiples years old work (sometime 10-15+) with no good translation or low quality res.

It's just not gonna happen. Some of my favourite works are not translated and at this point, I would pay for a shitty MTL because I know I ts simply not gonna get translated.

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Already translated here
https://e-hentai.org/g/797994/1497ad384c/

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@zeros122
That was already mentioned, even by myself.

If it's somehow not clear, the point of this transltion is to be closer to the original source. Other versions radically change some of the script.

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Read through your notes, I really appreciate the traveler having a different formal prose now. The previous read a little shonen-jump anyway. Pg. 3 I don't get why he says "Eh wot". Reads like he switched to cockney.

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@Pedantic_Horror
I just thought it would be funny. It originally says "何を..." or "Nani wo...", which is basically "What the..." (the japanese read it as "the What", as I understand it). Also, 何 can be an euphemism for genitals and を is used to "indicate object of interest (desire/like/hate)" or a subject in a sentence but also talk about an area traversed or subject of various actions... I suppose because it looks like a little guy jumping over something. Hence, "my shame". And given the context, that he is noting *her* interest in it (as in "You want this? Are you really going for that? Did you just went there?"), I accompanied it with "you want to...". The idea being that he is saying something akin to "What- What? In the butt? What- What? In my butt?" (South Park joke, for those who don't know).

Plus, he sounds uncharacteristically condescending in the next bubble. He is remarking the quickness of her actions in ways that make a mockery of it. And it was arranged in a way that alludes to saliva and "itadakimasu", a prayer said before eating (and just look at what she's doing!). I tried to keep the tone consistent, so I went for something that didn't sound as mean as "Such... haste, already gobbling it up, not even a moment and you went there for it..." but I suppose the point was that he was astonished/offended enough to break character (or is enacting the stereotype of stuffy british people being borderline asexual). What he said can also be translated simply as "Too... sudden, we are moving forward very fast / This is... suddenly going way too fast / This is now escalating too quickly...", by the way, but it's clearly not that simple, so it wouldn't be right to leave it as that.

It's a silly panel, so I was being a bit silly myself.

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