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It's not ntr, he shot her down, they became estranged and just now reconnected.
Still feels pathetic though.

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You are pathetic

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this is wonderful for once the author uses their imagination and finds a way past what so many Japanese H authors just cant get past.... hard to say exactly what it is but so many times things are tragic, and bitter and angry .NTR and abandoment, and abuse and loser guys losing to some jerk stud.

this is a story of real people. not all set in stone, some flexiblity. she changed and is still real he changed and grew up a little and was able to ask for what he wanted.

so i hope there is a sequel there is more of this story to tell.

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これは素晴らしい作品です。作者が想像力を駆使し、多くの日本のH作家が乗り越えられない道を切り開いたのです。具体的に何なのかは言い難いですが、悲劇的で、苦々しく、怒りに満ちた物語が数多く描かれています。寝取られ、見捨てられ、虐待、そして負け犬が意地悪な男に負ける物語です。

これは実在の人物の物語です。全てが固定されたものではなく、柔軟性もあります。彼女は変わり、今もなお現実であり、彼も変わり、少し成長し、自分の望むことを主張できるようになりました。

続編が出ることを願っています。この物語の続きがもっと語られるはずです。
作者さん、素晴らしい仕事をしていただきました。私のコメントを読んでいただけたら嬉しいです。

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I can't decide if I like this or not. It's a great departure from NTR, but I keep wanting him to buck up and just tell her why he stopped seeing her in school and that he's happy to reconnect now. She's obviously receptive to him, but he's going months without contacting her?? Idk man. The art is great though, good job author.

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@RamboPicos Lmao did that hit too close to home?
Didn’t mean to expose the truth or anything...

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she ended up with that thousand cock stare and empty eyes LOL

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This is a surprisingly mature and realistic take on a rekindled relationship. Dude still has some work to do, but he's realizing that he can't take her previous feelings for him for granted, and he's receptive to who she is now and that she's still gonna be her own person, albeit reluctantly.

Also, I do like how he rejected her because she was too plain, but now that she's physically his type, he's having trouble accepting the changes attached to her aesthetic.

This is a pretty good work.

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Niceee I have been waiting this fr while

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Yes! She is much prettier with long hair and without glasses.

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I trust my hero, he will fix her

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As usual, actually communicating what you want to say instead of leaving it up in the air would've at least did something to prevent this feeling.

He didn't say "I don't wanna go out with you ever ever", he said "for now", and because of exams. Given how serious those are in Japanese culture, it should be easy to understand. But nah.

Gotta have drama where there would not be so that FMC can fall onto as many dicks as she can manage while nursing her broken heart in Tokyo, and MC can become a cuck.

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@henta1lover0 to be honest, I think the only really pathetic thing forsay was that begging scene, that was actually genuinely cringy to read and I thought the author would go the degenerate route after that, so it felt a little nice when he came back to the more wholesome route. The logical way the MC should've tackled the scene would've been first to not go on directly to fuck, but scout and see if she's too far gone and even worth linking up with, if she is, then he probably should've made his intentions clear rather than look like a loser.
Either way, I think this is good for what it's trying to do, no dumb "but she was still a dick-obsessed cheater" ending unlike the usual.

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God she so gullible, but I guess it's better than got in with cocks that would makes her basically their drug mule. But the only option is the dude who not only rejected her as lover but outright as a friend back then. And stop about she got rejected because her aesthetic it's not the core reasons but it's appeal for the social shits fallacy, which itself appeal for the author (male protagonist own agenda) fallacy. It's so jackpot tho, they prolly didn't even home playing back then. So lol with the ntrs or contacts. And as a hardass anti-glasses hardliners, she really already attractive with glasses back then, mostly the moles, but cute unique hairstyle, not just cute and beauty but overflowing with feminine. As usual trash is trash. Also I disagree with many reactions already said.

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A cock loving whore + a cuck simp = perfect match!

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Not sure if I'm the only one but their backstory is pretty fucking awful: Rushed, hard to connect, logic leaps for the sake of drama (Dude how about we don't see each other), purposely ambiguous with the usual left on the air conclusion of it because why not gotta build up the drama but can't be bothered to make it feel satisfying for the developments that happened.

I don't know if this is a good ending or not, I really don't like it because both are fucked up on the head (One is an actual whore the other is a pathetic cuck) I can't trust any of them in keeping this relationship stable... The main story overall feels like it writes itself on a bunch of NTR and NTRS builds up that never pay off:
-Girl does a 180 BUT there's no bull next to her or blackmail happening
-Girl does porn BUT strictly for money and connections so she's a whore not a slut
-Girl asks him to watch his porn BUT it doesn't lead to cuckfaggotry
-Girl makes him beg for sex BUT the usual group of "fans" or a bull never show up lol
-Girl is confessed by the guy BUT she does actually accept him
-Guy pays for her OF to jerk off BUT there's no porn of her getting fucked (Yet)
-Guy is shown videos of the chick getting fucked and wants to watch more BUT he doesn't lol he lets her fuck her instead.
-Guy is forced to be for sex BUT it doesn't lead to any degen shit like what the fuck?
-Guy is taken by the girl to fuck BUT they do actually fuck... I mean yeah. No one joins and cucks him.
-Guy is filled with regrets BUT she actually ends up with her instead of fucking it again (No seriously that piece of shit page of the guy going LET'S STOP TALKING it's fucking retarded)
-Guy agrees to date her despite she is going to continue being a whore BUT we don't see any of that.

I don't know maybe I lost all good faith because the usual NTR bucks slop have ruined this shit for me I can't bring myself to like it. Anyways this feels more like a BBS work than NTR.

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From plain-looking otaku nerd to flashy and successful OnlyFans content creator, nice. :)

Is this really a form of netorare though? Guy made a mistake as a youth but it's not like the girl was "stolen" from him, she just went down an unusual path and the two reconciled years later after a chance meeting.

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Author could make a sequel as a parody of the onlyfans Boyfriend cameran cuck with mc filming her being fucked by chad

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It's good he got good ending but man, bro sway so easily only by just random word from nerd.

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Christ, a lot of responses here either show that they didn't get what they read, or they're showing their ass about how they feel about women.

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You could argue it's one thing for her to be a sex worker, but aside from that her whole behavior is a giant red flag that screams, "Dude, run away as far as possible".

Last edited on 30 April 2025, 00:43.

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I dunno man, the guy looks so silly and incredulous while the girl is a hoe quite receptive to this. Maybe I am wrong and in a plausible sequel everything could just go wholesome and be them happy.

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I'm genuinely not seeing any NTR here, I'm seeing a man making a valiant attempt to fuck a walking red flag back onto the straight and narrow.

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@junk123455 Agreed with u. Also, she said she would continue streaming but not necessarily "stabbing" the guy's back.

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The absolute state of cucks, and people will defend this relationship as if it were something healthy and normal

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