I tried to remove as much of the cuck and his thoughts as possible

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So all you did was take someone else's work, remove the pages that had the cuck in it, barely change any of the dialogue and you call it a "rewrite"? Lazy plagiarizer. Do a proper rewrite if you want a netori fanfiction. You have done a proper translation before. Don't just take someone's work, change it a little, and call it your rewrite.

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I did change some of it, maybe look a bit closer before you start yapping? Lazy reader.
The thoughts are all from the bull's pov now.
You're barking up the wrong tree my guy, I did this pretty quickly for fun
I never said it was my work? I readily acknowledged that it's just a slightly edited version of the original translation. Which is why I didn't touch the credits in the title and in the last page. But technically it's still a rewrite. And most importantly who cares?

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You could've just made your own story where you destroyed the bull before he does anything and "strip the meat off his bones for a BBQ." I mean, IMMHO that's what guys in 1st world countries would do.

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how about you cuck your fucking self and go die asshole!

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Likely that the translator did not pay for the work and likely no one that read it on here did either. Thieves being upset with thieves is humorous.

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@matxeon LMAO look at this cuckfag being upset over nothing. Aww did I ruin your cuck fantasies? Don't worry, once you wake up you'll still be the same pin dicked sized loser as always, furiously fisting your asshole to the sounds of your loved ones being made into fleshlights by the guy you hired. Go die in a ditch afterwards bitch

@Hectotane I don't care that much about it tbh, the only reason I did this was because some guys in the original translation's comment were complaining about the cuck's pathetic thoughts and wanted a version without it, so I simply obliged since it wouldn't take too much effort to remove. Changing everything or writing my own story would defeat the purpose.

@0riginal You're so right

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> posts literal plagiarism
> gets mad when the porn site has standards

you are a clown

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@henta1lover0 "Who cares?" Obviously everyone except you. You think it is funny to take someone else's completed work, remove some pages, leave around 90% of dialogues unchanged, and called it your rewrite? Who does that? Just do a proper rewrite translation and no one would have a problem with it.

Everyone just sign the Expunge Petition and end this mistake.

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As we can see here you can post the sloppiest Ai slop, you can shit all over the place with the lowest grade bbc ntr, the kind that would make even devin dickie cringe in disgust at you, but when it comes to rewrites, users suddenly have standards.

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@ LazyRemu: That's the community for you, and why filters exist. The AI slop, the bbc ntr, the "badly written stories told via Koikatsu and CharaStudio." The people behind e-Hentai can go and wipe the site clean of stuff like that today. They did it with "forbidden content," they'll do it with badly-edited rewrites.

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@kinglionheart2000 You just don't seem to get it. The whole point of it was for it to be the same as the original translation but just slightly edited, hence with the slight shift of pronouns, it's now more in line with netori. So I don't consider it MY work or anything, the credit belongs to Cultured Commissions, this is merely a variant of it. It is meant for the people who simply don't want the the cuck's rambling in their porn. You on the other hand have a problem with it being mostly unchanged when that's the point.
Whatever, I'm done wasting any more time on this.

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